Seeing, chapter 5

Mar 10, 2011 23:12


Title: Seeing
Pairing: Demi/Selena,
Rating: M
Summary: Sometimes you need more your than eyes in order to see what's in front of you.
A/N: So I finally got around to updating this story. I can't tell you guys how sorry I am for not updating soon enough. But the drama known as real life needed to be taken care of as well. You all know how that is. I'd ( Read more... )

semi, gomato, selena gomez, demi lovato, alphateam101

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whurmy March 11 2011, 05:10:55 UTC
You finally update and I swear you make it the most depressing chapter of it all, so far.

Which is totally okay with me, because I'm a sucker for angst. <3

UGH I love. Like so much. I was wondering when Demi would do that, try to feel Selena's features to know what she looked like. Of course they're better friends now than I thought they would be in chapter five, but whatever. That's quite a good thing.

I like that you realize that, even after a few weeks, things would still be awkward and Demi would indeed be treading lightly.

But oh my goodness I feel so bad for Selly. And Demi, but I'll get to that in a minute. To have to hear people whisper about you no matter where you went? Geez. That'd drive so many eighteen year old girls to suicide-ish thoughts. Or at least self harm. Not all of them. But I know it'd mess me up. o.o But then again, I guess she wouldn't want more scars. That was dumb of me to say.

Anywho.

Oh my God, Demi. :( That was like. The saddest masturbation session I've ever read. Poor bb. She shouldn't have interrupted Selly. It woulda been magical! ;_;

Ahem.

You rock. I was worried you'd never update again. But yes, writing takes a back seat to real life, we'd much rather you put writing on the back burner than stress out about updating in a timely manner. <3 I hope you're doing well.

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