I wrote this ficlet for snoopypez's Ron ficathon. It's Ron/Padma (and you don't know how weird it is for me to have a story I can't submit to SQ) and I hope you enjoy
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Oh, that was cute. Love "Ravenclaw in a tizzy" ... only one nitpick from my behalf My sister was the one who told me Ron wanted to invite me to the Yule Ball. He'd been too shy before, she explained. I understood perfectly--Harry had been too shy to ask Padma, and they did everything together in those days. Surely you mean "Harry had been too shy to ask Padma" or something like that.
Yeah, it was cute and fluffy. Stop fretting. It's up to the standard one expects of an alphabet fluffy fic even though the ship isn't what one usually expects.
(And apparently I do errors when I'm pointing out errors :D).
Thanks! I tried to keep the spirit of the Yule Ball--Ron's focused on Harry, yeah right--but make it convincing that they had a good time. For the sake of the child. ;)
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Surely you mean "Harry had been too shy to ask Padma" or something like that.
:sigh: Yeah, that's supposed to be Parvati. Fixed. Thanks for pointing it out.
But you seriously liked it? Because I seriously want reassurances. (I am not above begging.)
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(And apparently I do errors when I'm pointing out errors :D).
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I will stop fretting. Yes.
And apparently I do errors when I'm pointing out errors
I knew what you meant and I fixed what needed to be fixed. That's the important part. ;)
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I think it's cute.
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The last part, the little dialogue with their daughter, is the best part!
Sweet is the Word!!!
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This is adorable, and a very convincing Padma-eye-view of the Yule Ball, barring her prevarications. So cute!
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Gaaaah! So much love! Whee! :D :D
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