Chickenpox, an SPN ficlet (1 of 1)

Oct 24, 2007 23:51

Title: Chickenpox
Author: alphabet26
Pairings/Characters: John, Pastor Jim, Dean and Sam
Rating: G
Category: Gen
Word Count: 520
Spoilers: None
Summary: The boys have chickenpox.
Notes/Warnings: Nothing to warn for. Unbeta'd, if you notice anything, please let me know.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.

Chickenpox )

fic: spn, fic, fandom: spn

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alphabet26 October 24 2007, 15:12:13 UTC
Wow, quick reply! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for telling me your favorite part. I'm always curious about what works for others.

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alphabet26 October 24 2007, 15:46:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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tsuki_no_bara October 24 2007, 15:54:02 UTC
at least they both got it over with at the same time.... i love frustrated!john - "i said to stop scratching" - and i love that he's already on his way to pastor jim's when he calls, and that he tries to warn jim that sick wee!winchesters are not easy to have in your house. hee.

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alphabet26 October 24 2007, 15:58:41 UTC
Thank you so much for the compliments! I'm glad you liked my John.

Sorry, I'll have to edit and make it clearer--they're adults, which is kind of part of the joke. If they were still wee, I'm sure that John wouldn't dump them on Jim, he'd take care of them himself.

Yeah, best to have them sick at the same time--my brother and I chickenpox consecutively, so our parents had about a month of chickenpox all told. Eek!

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tsuki_no_bara October 24 2007, 16:17:21 UTC
i didn't realize they were adults! that makes it even better! *snicker*

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alphabet26 October 24 2007, 16:18:55 UTC
I've edited some, and added a last line to torture Sam some more. I'm glad that made it better and not worse.

Because I was thinking, when did the boys stick around in one place? Maybe they dodged chickenpox in every city!

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jacedesbff October 24 2007, 16:09:18 UTC
I love looks into their early childhoods. Love it!

I remember when my first "pock" showed up. *laughs* I was about nine and the whole family had gone out for Chinese food (we were poor--it was a big deal). :-) I looked down on my hip and saw this big boil-looking thing. I showed it to my mom, and she dragged everyone right out of the booth and back to the car. I was all, "Mom! Can't we order first?!" "NO." Dude, I had them everywhere. LOL

Nice (if weird) bit of normalcy for the wee!chesters! :-) Thanks for sharing!

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alphabet26 October 24 2007, 16:12:39 UTC
Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic! I remember having a bunch of pox on my arms and trying to count them. Of course, I couldn't count much past 10, so that put a crimp in that...

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jacedesbff October 24 2007, 16:36:31 UTC
And I read your other comments and realized that they're older here. Hee! Even better!!

I just talked to my mom and she said that my brother had pox inside of his mouth! Ew! (Poor li'l baby!)

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alphabet26 October 24 2007, 16:39:34 UTC
I'm so glad that makes it better. Thank you!

In his mouth? Ugh! That must have been so gross when they crusted over and stuff...I'm sorry for your brother!

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fleshflutter October 24 2007, 17:25:15 UTC
How much more brilliant is it when you realise they're pretty much adults? So so much love for this! :)

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alphabet26 October 24 2007, 17:29:26 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! ^_^

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