How We Are (but not how we're going to be) Part 4

[alpha_hydra]

Comments

[allika]

Hi! I'm really enjoying this story. Misunderstanding rom coms are kind of a favorite of mine.

I did want to let you know that there's maybe an issue with your coding on part 4 - it appears like one big block of text to me. Kind of hard to read.

But, I'm so in to this story that now I can't stop, so I'm going to read it anyway. :) Just wanted to let you know!

[alpha_hydra]

Oh wow, thanks for braving that monstrous block of text! If you couldn't get through it I totally understand, but it's fixed now :)

[kuhekabir]

Wow, I would very much like to continue reading this but I can't. Not with the formatting giving me a headache. Can you maybe fix it? Thanks!

[alpha_hydra]

Yikes! Sorry about that! I fixed it now; thanks for letting me know about that hideous block of text :)

[insideapollo]

i loved this chapter so much!! you did an awesome job having them gradually warm up to each other. my original rough draft was the chess scene but i didn't think it was good enough! i hope to do it over and show it to you soon :D

[alpha_hydra]

eeee that chess scene <3 That was one of my favorite scenes to write actually :D I'm sure your drawing of it was amazing just the way it was! :DD