It was a cold, but sunny day in the neighboring suburbs around Metro City. “I like it better when it rains.” Psycho Delic said to no one else other than himself
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Awwwwww!!! These new parts were so adorable!!!! I don't know what I liked more, if the ice-skating, of the photo-booth! Though the photo-booth idea is a very popular cliche on romantic fanfictions, here you used it in a very cute way. Great job :D
Overall it seemed like a good way of ending their mall adventure, though it might benefit from more elaboration, but you get the general idea. I also have plans for incorporating the photos into a later section of the chapter.
As LONG as this chapter is getting I will probably break this up into two parts and start writing the opening scene where I formally bring The Doom Syndicate into the picture. That is if my muse will cooperates.
Music Man still needs to do some more fretting about what to do about Christmas. Ask for some advice and then there is Christmas Eve and Christmas day. So I still have a lot of ground to cover before I call this chapter finished.
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Hmmm...I didn't know the photo booth thing was commonly used in romantic fanfic.
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And yeah. I've seen in in many fics from many different fandoms. It's something very popular.
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Overall it seemed like a good way of ending their mall adventure, though it might benefit from more elaboration, but you get the general idea. I also have plans for incorporating the photos into a later section of the chapter.
As LONG as this chapter is getting I will probably break this up into two parts and start writing the opening scene where I formally bring The Doom Syndicate into the picture. That is if my muse will cooperates.
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Music Man still needs to do some more fretting about what to do about Christmas. Ask for some advice and then there is Christmas Eve and Christmas day. So I still have a lot of ground to cover before I call this chapter finished.
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