what you missed and what was missing you, what was cold and hungry for you, waiting in the dark.
Yum, that is so good that I'm hungry for more. Really like the cold and hungry for you phrase. So much of fan fic deals in all the hot and steamy that cold and hungry becomes very striking.
for weeks the only Casey that Zeke sees is twilight Casey, in glimpses,
Love this line, the whole description of how Casey looks and how Zeke sees him is good but this line rocks me it's almost melodic.
"Hey Case," Zeke says, weirdly pleased to see him, oddly glad at the prospect of talking to him again. Strangely hoping, and so wrong, that this means things are going to go back to normal.
Ahh. I like this. Much what I'd expect the reformed Zeke of the movie to be feeling right about now. And the air of quiet menace - when Casey hasn't said a word... *shivers*
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This was great. I love the last line.
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If you're writing some too, ooooooh, can't wait to see that. Vampire Casey. Yum. Well, ANY Casey, yum. But... yeah.
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E!Lij: bzuh? I don't recall anything happening... *frowns worriedly*
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we needs it, we wants more!
*still daydreams of peterpan!Lij in her own corner*
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Yum, that is so good that I'm hungry for more. Really like the cold and hungry for you phrase. So much of fan fic deals in all the hot and steamy that cold and hungry becomes very striking.
for weeks the only Casey that Zeke sees is twilight Casey, in glimpses,
Love this line, the whole description of how Casey looks and how Zeke sees him is good but this line rocks me it's almost melodic.
Nice.
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Kickass, yeah.
*throws in yet another vote for more*
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Ahh. I like this. Much what I'd expect the reformed Zeke of the movie to be feeling right about now. And the air of quiet menace - when Casey hasn't said a word... *shivers*
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