Natural Psychology (2/2)

[allvowels]

Title: Natural Psychology

Author: AllVowels

Rating: R/M

Spoilers: Through Season 3

Summary: Ficcy Friday prompt by claymay83:  Annie and Jeff are together and have had a VERY extended honeymoon phase. Annie starts to fear that as a couple all they have between them is sex and proposes going an entire day where they’re naked together, but act normally

Comments

[iknowitsbutters]

What a treat to see you take on claymay's latest awesome prompt - awesome visuals and all. I probably would have wound up having Jeff break first and have him be affected by Annie more than Annie's affected by Jeff - but then that would defeat the purpose of Jeff proving he loves Annie for more than sex, so shows what I know. And awesome break in the middle with the hapless pizza guy and cop getting caught in the middle.

This rings extra special for me because I actually made a kink prompt about Jeff and Annie touching themselves in front of each other - which crittab turned into a chapter for her kink series. So there could be worse ideas for you to use for your smut debut.

[allvowels]

I'm so glad that it was enjoyable. And I had thought about Jeff breaking first, but I didn't know how to write a Winger speech that would rectify the situation with Annie. This way it was Annie's fault.

And now I will have to go read that and compare, I apparently missed that series so now I have reading to do ;)

[chicette20]

Yeah, this definitely wasn't too terrible. In fact, it was pretty much the opposite of it!

There's so many things that I loved about this.. but I think my favorite part was that even though Annie was the one who insisted on waiting until midnight before they touched each other, she was the one to cave first while Jeff was the one who ended up showing great restraint because he was determined to prove to her that he cared about her.

Oh, and I loved the fact that he didn't even realize that not only did he call Annie his girlfriend in front of Det. Tracy, but he also admitted that him going along with her idea of being naked all day was pretty much proof that he did, in fact, love her!

Gotta love Larry going to the police though. Can't say I blame him. Anybody would have been suspicious after an encounter like that while delivering a pizza LOL!

[allvowels]

Thank you so much! I was a little worried about this one so I'm glad people enjoyed it!

And when I read the prompt I immediately thought of the pizza situation, so that part is my favorite.

[crittab]

Lol, oh my. I'd think they'd practice some common decency when answering the door, and some safety practises while cooking things that have a tendency to splatter grease, but otherwise, this was all just pretty much perfect. I want a naked day with Jeff Winger. Can I book one in?

[allvowels]

Yes, apparently they didn't think things through that day. Maybe being naked dumbs you down? Otherwise thank you!

If I had the power to book a naked Jeff Winger, my life would be pretty perfect.

[claymay83]

Wow, this was amazing. I loved that Jeff was both so turned on by Annie and yet extremely determined to see it through to the end to prove how much he cares for her. And that he just naturally called her his girlfriend and said he loved her, rather then made a big proclamation in saying it. And Jeff and Annie touching each other in front of one another…god damn. I knew the second part was rated NC-17 for a reason, but I never expected that.

Other highlights: Jeff answering the door for the officer and having to explain why he couldn’t put clothes on, Troy eating dice (even though I’d like to think he’s not quite that dumb, that made me laugh out loud, Annie and Jeff’s ‘what I like about you’ game, and Annie’s resolve breaking first.

Thanks for taking on this prompt and doing such a good job with it.

[allvowels]

Yeah! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

I don't think Troy's that dumb either, but it made me giggle. Maybe he was high on the weed from Britta, or Jeff convinced him that eating dice would make him better so the game would end? Who knows.

[nyclove3]

[allvowels]

I'm so glad you enjoyed!

And if I was a police officer I'd be freaked out by Greendale too. That study group is just crazy :)