Can't Take That Away [s/a]

Oct 26, 2010 22:20

 Title: Can't Take That Away
Author: xvegas_skies
Rating: PG-13
POV: Zack
Pairing: Jalex
Summary: i just wish it didn't feel like a kick in the gut.
Title belongs to: The Friday Night Boys
Disclaimer: Untrue.
A/N: This is really short, and well i don't think it's that great, but i wrote it randomly and thought i'd post it :)

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abzhousley October 26 2010, 21:24:04 UTC
hguidhfiwehdksa i love this a lottttt.
WRITE MORE GODDAMMIT. loveyou:)xxx

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xvegas_skies October 26 2010, 21:41:21 UTC
:D
you have so much faith in me :')
love you girlllll <3

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dougiens October 26 2010, 21:29:01 UTC
Okay, this is one of the best one shots I've read in a long time.
Seriously.

I absolutely love Zack's pov.

The last few lines were perfect. <3

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xvegas_skies October 26 2010, 21:39:58 UTC
wow, thankyou!
same, it's different :')
thankyou so much for reading <3

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new_againxo October 26 2010, 21:35:46 UTC
i loved this so much - you should totally write more ! haha
<333

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xvegas_skies October 26 2010, 21:42:23 UTC
:D
thankyou!
haha i can never think of ideas :')
<3

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sweetyyouhadme October 27 2010, 05:54:57 UTC
This was epic
I definitely think you should write more
:]

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xvegas_skies October 28 2010, 01:09:28 UTC
:D thankyou muchly!
haha everything i write fails! :')

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damnedifidoyah October 27 2010, 10:42:58 UTC
OH MY GOD!

if only this is Chaptered where Zack will fall for Rian and vise versa, oh gosh... follow up please? this is so great! and I totally whore this out on Tumblr, shameless promotion, haha xD

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xvegas_skies October 28 2010, 01:12:13 UTC
hahaha if it was chaptered i'd probably ruin it! i'll see what i can think of :')
thankyou!
i'm totally following you on tumblr now haha xxx

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damnedifidoyah October 28 2010, 03:58:17 UTC
daw'h but I do hope a follow up will come, don't leave poor Zack in his misery please.. :3

and oh! who you be on Tumblr?

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