I full out sobbing right now and I'm not even gonna try to hide it. This was just so sad, I can't even explain. But so sad that it was amazing. I just wanna sit here and cry, hoping that this would never happen. But you are an amazing writer. I loved this, but also hate it. Do you know what I mean? I'm a sucker for a happy ending, so that's why. But, really, this was great. I don't even know what I am saying, so I am going to go now. <3
The sadness. So much sadness. Just, ugh, my heart, it's breaking. I can't even.... write more please? Just, maybe don't rip out my heart next time? XD Because I really did like it and your writing :)
Aw im sorry I broke your heart! I'm trying for a fluffy oneshot by Thursday,but I need to update my other fic first. So yeah. It'll probably be kind of like Saturday,the oneshot I posted a few weeks ago. Maybe that'll fix it? Thank you!(:
oh my god girl,.. and I just cried, like cried softly, because of sadness and happiness I feel at the same time, this is so beautiful, you have no idea how much I love this, and oh my god, I can't just,.. hmmmm..
I love how you end it because after all that's said and done they'll be together, after 57 years they'd still end up together,.. this is just amazing and it will end up in my treasured memories and will linger there forever, so I can come back to this story, sad as it may seem but this is just wonderful.
sorry if I left you with a very long comment and I practically wrote a story here, but I just want you to know how much I love this. <3
Aww,sorry for making you cry! But thank you! And yeah, I wasn't gonna add the end part,I was just going to leave it at Alex leaving the graveyard, but I just had to add a resolution so :3 now you see why it was so hard for me to write the sadness yesterday!
I would have understood! I would be pissed if someone left a fic like that! XD why are you thanking me? I should be thanking you for your amazing comments!
I would like to first say that you are a wonderful writer. This made my heart drop and made me almost cry. I loved it though, which is surprising since I hate when characters die. Towards the end I started thinking about how when you die do and you "pass on" to the after life, do you stay the same age of when you died. But that doesn't matter, all that does is how awesome this was :)
Sorry I made you almost cry! I'm glad you liked it though! I wrote in the 'Jack would always be 23' part in saying that his body wouldn't age, but you could think of it like that. I, personally, think that after you die, your mind would continue to age, as in you'd continue to gain knowledge and comprehend more as it ages, but you'll always be in the same body. Woah, deep comment is deep. Done with that. xD
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I know what you mean, I love happy endings
too! :3
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I'm trying for a fluffy oneshot by Thursday,but I need to update my other fic first.
So yeah. It'll probably be kind of like Saturday,the oneshot I posted a few weeks ago.
Maybe that'll fix it?
Thank you!(:
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I love how you end it because after all that's said and done they'll be together, after 57 years they'd still end up together,.. this is just amazing and it will end up in my treasured memories and will linger there forever, so I can come back to this story, sad as it may seem but this is just wonderful.
sorry if I left you with a very long comment and I practically wrote a story here, but I just want you to know how much I love this. <3
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But thank you!
And yeah, I wasn't gonna add the end part,I was just going to leave it at Alex leaving the graveyard, but I just had to add a resolution so :3
now you see why it was so hard for me to write the sadness yesterday!
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thank you for this,..
and yeah, now I understand,. can't argue abymore cause this is amazing.. <33
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why are you thanking me?
I should be thanking you for your amazing comments!
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This made my heart drop and made me almost cry. I loved it though, which is surprising since I hate when characters die. Towards the end I started thinking about how when you die do and you "pass on" to the after life, do you stay the same age of when you died. But that doesn't matter, all that does is how awesome this was :)
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I'm glad you liked it though!
I wrote in the 'Jack would always be 23' part in saying that his body wouldn't age, but you could think of it like that. I, personally, think that after you die, your mind would continue to age, as in you'd continue to gain knowledge and comprehend more as it ages, but you'll always be in the same body.
Woah, deep comment is deep.
Done with that. xD
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Thank you though!
I definitely will! I can't really imagine writing any other pairig, tbh.
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