The Rose

[allthingsdecent]

This is a little story I cooked up based on the events of Joy and The Itch.
    Rated: PG-13, so my journal is once again fun for the whole family!

Disclaimer: I am merely borrowing these characters for a group date.

She was pretty sure that James Wilson was about to kiss her.

This was strange for two reasons. First, they were

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[tauwja]

Asdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjklasdfghjk LOBE! :D ♥ ♥ ♥

One thing though, I think you forgot a verb somewhere:

Cuddy shot a look at Wilson. “You knew he coming tonight?”

Shouldn't 'was' be in there? :-)

[allthingsdecent]

Fixed! Thanks bb.

[tauwja]

You're welcome :D
You have such crazy ideas LOL (the Bachelorette?? XD), but they WORK, and I just love your writing style ♥ ♥

[allthingsdecent]

Thanks! Sometimes I have no idea how I come up with this shit. ;D

[flippet]

“Yes,” House said, looking at Wilson devilishly. “I’ll have what he’s having.”

Ah ha ha ha, perfect. ♥

I love this. You got just the right tone. :-) And I love the crumpled rose at the end.

And I also love that you took a reach into the past to write a new story - I wish more writers would, or at least wouldn't be afraid of it. If it was good then, it's good now. :-)

[allthingsdecent]

Thanks. I'm so new to this whole fan fic writing racket. I pretty much got obsessed with writing them after Bombshells. So there's definitely a lot of older stuff I can explore. :)

BTW, I was THIS close to calling this story "I'll Have What He's Having"!

[vicpei]

So sweet! I love the three of them. Thank you :) I'll go to bed feeling all light and smiling. And hooray for older episodes.

[allthingsdecent]

Thanks! I'm glad I sent you off to bed with sweet dreams!

[zanilou]

Never ever stop writing. Please. I love your stories, and I'm greedy and already looking forward to the next one! :)

[allthingsdecent]

Ha, thanks! I don't have any ideas for the next one, but they do pop into my head at random times (like while watching the Bachelorette.)

[undead_liar]

Ahabshbajksndjkn, so cute! *w*
Never stop writing, ok? <3

[allthingsdecent]

Okay! ♥♥♥