Just finished this and holly metal rocks batman!!! It was epic in every way. *flail*
From start to finish I was pulled in and could not stop reading till the end. Your characterization was so good that it played like a movie in my head and the Oc's added to the story and were actually believable characters. :)
I am so grabbing the ficmix and the .pdf file so that I can read this on my Nookcolor while in the car on long trips, cause this was too amazing not to read again and again.
I have to start by disclaiming I'm not really into the whole D/S thing (which has never been a problem until I entered this fandom LOL). But since this was co-written by my dear midnight_writer I had to read it.
I really enjoyed this fic. The progression of their relationship felt natural and well paced and all your OC's were interesting and felt real. Fabulous work.
Reading D/s fics is one of my indulgent pleasures and I think this one is all kinds of wonderful. The pacing is just perfect. So many times an author will rush things to get to the sex or the hot kink. I love that you took us there organically. You laid the groundwork and then carefully constructed the layers. You took us on their journey and that's what makes this fic so lovely.
To me, both Harvey and Mike were well-portrayed and you let the fic emerge naturally from the canon basis so it all flowed seamlessly. Your Mike was an innate submissive without compromising his strength to do so. Very nicely done.
I enjoyed your OCs and they fit perfectly into this 'verse. It makes complete sense to me that Harvey - and Mike - would have and need a "family" in the scene.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I eagerly await more fics in this 'verse.
Thank you so much. We wanted to approach this in a way that shows D/s in not only a sexual light, but as a lifestyle and really do it justice. I hope we have.
We're half way through epic part two and have plans for a third in the works.........
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From start to finish I was pulled in and could not stop reading till the end. Your characterization was so good that it played like a movie in my head and the Oc's added to the story and were actually believable characters. :)
I am so grabbing the ficmix and the .pdf file so that I can read this on my Nookcolor while in the car on long trips, cause this was too amazing not to read again and again.
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We're working on a sequel and have plans for a fic starring those OC's, because, well, we're a little in love with them.
Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it. I was nervous no one would brave the 80+k!
You're the sweetest.
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I really enjoyed this fic. The progression of their relationship felt natural and well paced and all your OC's were interesting and felt real. Fabulous work.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, I know both acquiescence_ and I feel like it's our baby. xxxxxxxxxxxx
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To me, both Harvey and Mike were well-portrayed and you let the fic emerge naturally from the canon basis so it all flowed seamlessly. Your Mike was an innate submissive without compromising his strength to do so. Very nicely done.
I enjoyed your OCs and they fit perfectly into this 'verse. It makes complete sense to me that Harvey - and Mike - would have and need a "family" in the scene.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I eagerly await more fics in this 'verse.
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We're half way through epic part two and have plans for a third in the works.........
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