Comments | allira_dream: [FIC] Heaven to No One Else.

allira_dream

[FIC] Heaven to No One Else.

Mar 06, 2007 13:25

Title: Heaven to No One Else.
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou.
Warnings: Smut, angst.
Characters/couples: Conrad/Yuuri, others.
Summary: What happiness is about.
Rating: R/NC17.
Notes: Written for the kkm_vday. I'd ask who knew it was me, but I fail and I'm sure everyone and their pandas knew :p.

( Heaven to No One Else. )

fic: kyou kara maou

Comments 9

koramay March 7 2007, 01:26:31 UTC

Fantastic! I enjoyed this very much. I particularly liked the details about the rebellion in the other country, it felt very well thought out.

allira_dream March 7 2007, 20:14:52 UTC

Thank you so much! I reckon that not every country will be happy with becoming allies with the demon people, so I'm glad you thought it worked.

ynm March 7 2007, 02:47:11 UTC

*fans self* Hot!! I was squeeing (is that even usable?!?) when I saw the R/NC-17 rating.

Yet so very, very sweet and IC. Loved Yozak and Conrad's exchange. Running around in heels, indeed. I shall need tips from him, since running in heels is beyond my capabilities. LoL!

allira_dream March 7 2007, 20:11:31 UTC

Thanks!

And Yozak is just that good.

life is made of small details ... gen50 March 7 2007, 06:47:46 UTC

i couldnt agree more.

and frankly, those are the moments memories are made of...

Re: life is made of small details ... allira_dream March 7 2007, 20:09:48 UTC

Thanks ^^

poopoo_chan March 26 2007, 21:05:04 UTC

Oh, I love it so much! What stood out for me especially was your mentions of rain-water in it: it's as if they're venturing into something new and totally unexplored before. That, or something equally as cheesy. I don't know, I suppose it may be because I'm reading it during the spring and so rain-water seems to me like new things?

I didn't really get what Yozak meant by
Really, captain. I know you’re fond of your left arm; I just didn’t know it was focused over your left hand.
Did something happen to Conrad's left hand?

Anyways, I also really really like how you didn't make their first-time smut perfect("If when Yuuri slides his tongue into his mouth is a bit awkward, Conrad doesn't care"), because it shouldn't be, and thus seems much more real to us readers because it isn't. =)

Oohh, but it was also a bit confusing for me during long sentences like:
Yuuri arches a little, breaking the kiss and his breath catching again once he curls his hand around his erection, dropping his head against his wet shoulder with a gasp.Like, who's ( ... )

allira_dream March 26 2007, 23:51:05 UTC

Thank you so much for your review!

Now, to answer your questions: Yozak meant that Conrad was fond of his left hand to masturbate. It was sort of a dig at how Conrad lost his other arm, kinda.

I'm really fond of smut that isn't perfect. Perfect - from my point of view - means kind of boring, especially when you consider where they were and all, and it being their first time.

Yuuri arches a little, breaking the kiss and his breath catching again once he curls his hand around his erection, dropping his head against his wet shoulder with a gasp.

That, I'm afraid, was funky grammar from me. I meant that Yuuri dropped his head against Conrad's shoulder.

Again, thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^

poopoo_chan March 28 2007, 01:16:22 UTC

Ooh, thank you SO much for clarifying! Now that I know what Yozak actually meant, it all seems kind of obvious. I mean, "[Conrad] shakes his head and fixes his uniform"? Heeeheheeheheee! Blatantly obvious.

Ah, that made me re-read the entire thing again. Hehe, reading good conxyuu makes me feel so warm!

Thank YOU for writing such good fanfic =)