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011. Rooftops

Oct 28, 2009 22:05

Sungmin sat on the roof thinking about the chinese man. He ran his fingers through his hair and sighed. He hated thinking about Hankyung. He hated thinking about his laugh, his smile, his gorgeous eyes, about how much he loved him, and especially about the fact that he belonged to Heechul and not him.

'He loves Heechul, not you. Get over him Sungmin ( Read more... )

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allibrownie October 29 2009, 02:58:41 UTC

*spot for my blair noona. :D*

elle_sj October 31 2009, 06:47:38 UTC

finally read.. omg veggie... do you know you got the hair on my back raising??! omg... very good executing... ommo.. all i can do is praise all your works, but this really hit me.. rumbled love... the fact that heechul love minnie, and minnie love hankyung ang hankyung got hurt because of heechul's true feelings is just exquisite...! i love it veggie..lol.. but... the way minnie fell of the roof is just horrid..lol.. well, thats the way you want it, then yeah..lol.. oh my minnie, just love heechul or kyuhyun..lol..and much more better if you just love ME..*makes a piece sign to veggie..lol..^^
goodwork! very creative..^^

minniepumpkin October 29 2009, 03:42:12 UTC

how could you kill my Minnie once again?? TT____TT

allibrownie October 30 2009, 00:50:46 UTC

i'm sorry. >.<
at least it wasn't kyu again. xD

kagami222 October 29 2009, 03:49:53 UTC

jaslkfj;lksadjf WAIT, WHAT JUST HAPPENED OAO!! I feel like I blinked somewhere and then all of a sudden..... I-I think I'll just continue to stare at my computer screen in shock..

On another note, I probably shouldn't, but I laughed at "100 floor apartment". Oh boy, that's tall. I hope Hannie has to walk all the way back down >:(

allibrownie October 30 2009, 00:53:40 UTC

yay i shocked people. xD
that's the affect i wanted...i always make it lovey dovey so i decided to make it dramatic. >:D
MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. >:D

anyways. xD
i was like 'hmmm how far should I make minnie fall?' xD

lotherial October 29 2009, 10:36:28 UTC

Oh wow O_O
I so did not see that coming!
Poor Minnie :( I feel really sad for him and kind of scared of Geng at the same time. Really wouldn't have expected to see this kind of strong emotion and hatred coming from him.
I really like this ^^

allibrownie October 30 2009, 00:55:21 UTC

thank you. >.<
i was getting sick of making everyone fall inlove in the end...so i made it dramatic and shocking. >:D

elle_sj October 31 2009, 14:39:18 UTC

ok.. im doing this commenting again..lol..u got the hair on my back raising! the story is very shocking..lol.. it is nicely executed and the choice of words is so good..lol.. and yah veggie! ure getting better in emphasizing kissing scenes..lol.. the thought of my minnie loving hankyung,hankyung loving heechul and heechul loving minnie is so exquisite..lol.. u really did a great job here...^^

but.. the way my minnie died, its just so horrid..lol..100th floor?? ure nuts veggie..lol

well anyways, minnie, just love chullie or kyu from now on ok? but it will be so much better if you will only LOVE ME..^^

*gives peace sign to veggie..lol.. love you!

allibrownie October 31 2009, 15:23:19 UTC

ahahaha i found your first comment. xD
i didn't see it the other day. xD
thnaks for making a new comment. :D

i wanted to make minnie fall very far. xD
and my kissing scenes suck and they make me blush....
i feel like such a perv writing them. xD

allibrownie October 31 2009, 15:23:53 UTC

**thanks