Third Street Laundry, Chapter 1

Jul 31, 2011 21:28

Title: Third Street Laundry, Chapter 1
Pairing: pre-Jenna/Kono, Steve/Danny (in future chapters)
Rating: PG
Length: 2900 words
Warnings: Some long-forgotten, period-appropriate ethnic slurs.
Summary: I thought about just leaving them to it--Chin's business is Chin's business, and I had about a ton of cheongsams sitting dirty by the wash bucket--but I ( Read more... )

steve/danny, jenna/kono, hawaii five-0, fic

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imaginarycircus August 1 2011, 21:25:00 UTC
*SQUEAK*

I AM SHOUTY WITH GLEE!

Also I am leaving you feedback here and at AO3 because I am too excited to put all my thoughts in one place.

I loved the fight with Steve. And I love ratty Steve. Mmmmmmmm ratty smoking Steve. I can't wait for Danny to come along.

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allheadybooks August 2 2011, 00:05:40 UTC
Thank you! I have this whole backstory in my head for Steve that I'm not sure is going to make it into the story: he's a WWI vet, in the Navy since he was just a kid, and he came back to shore to avenge his father's death and take over the family business--rumrunning. I figure he would be ratty, given the life he's lived!

And hopefully you won't have to wait too long for Danny because he is demanding to be in chapter two. :)

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imaginarycircus August 2 2011, 00:07:06 UTC
*chinhands*

I just want to make you cookies. And cocktails.

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allheadybooks August 2 2011, 00:11:43 UTC
My partner says I should go for the cookie option, because she is allergic to alcohol and couldn't share the cocktails. So definitely cookies. :)

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imaginarycircus August 2 2011, 00:15:03 UTC
Since this is H50 I'm thinking white chocolate macadamia. :D

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