WM Topic: Shrewd.

[allfor_one]

It was on the first blush of the sunrise that I had received request from Monsiuer de Tréville for my presence alone in his hotel. What was to transpire did not become much of a surprise to me, you see, as it was the morning following the eventide I had pledged my loyalty and allegiance to Monsieur de Tréville, to His Majesty, and to France. It

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[pinkhairedauror]

Oh very nice! I really, really like the way you've shown de Tréville, as one who can, so briefly and concisely, play the heart-strings of even a man of such depth and dignity as Athos.

Beautiful writing!

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[allfor_one]

Even though Tréville had a small role in comparison to the others, I felt he really came across as a strong character and someone Athos would even though he'd probably would love to deck him at times silently look up to, especially as a fresh from the oven Musketeer. :D

Thank you so much for the comment and compliment! <3 This really made my morning.

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[pinkhairedauror]

He had a small role compared others, yes, but his actions and their effects affected the musketeers, and even the king and the cardinal (as per the book, at least) in very many ways. haha oh yes! And yes, I totally agree. And I also believe it's time for me to re-read the book again, for the 30-odd time >.>

Aww! I am glad! :) Monday mornings FTW <3 And anytime; I can rarely stop myself from commenting when I love something I read :)

[and_you_love_me]

OOC: *bows to your awesomeness of writing*

[bravotwozero]

Loyalty is underrated. It's an admirable quality you have.

[OOC: And you are totally made of awesome. She just couldn't resist saying something considering her background.]

[fannyfae]

Well done and true to Dumas as usual! I am so VERY happy you are back oline and in writers_muses! I cannot wait to read more. Your writing is better than ever!

[all_forme]

That was - most excellent!