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A Kiss That Counts [Smallville, PG]

Sep 02, 2006 20:07

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challenge: 30_kisses, fic: smallville, comm: melodicmuse

Comments 4

::Stalking you:: blouper September 3 2006, 02:24:24 UTC

I hope you don't mind, I found you through 30_kisses and you write my favorite Smallville couple.

Small error I found; "...her eyes -had- becoming better at masking her real emotions in her old age." You had an extra word.

Otherwise excellent way of using the kiss prompt. I love your Cloe/Clark, sexual tension and innuedos make my day brighter.

Re: ::Stalking you:: all_you_wanted September 4 2006, 16:14:26 UTC

Thanks. These prompts are a little odd to fit around. Either you have to go with exactly what they say or be creative. I chose creative.

I didn't beta this. I'm sure there is more than one type in it. I'll fix it probably later this week when I'm a work and I'm suppose to be working. ;)

rjchasez September 3 2006, 08:25:54 UTC

*sigh* Just... *sigh* That's all I have to say.

Becca

all_you_wanted September 4 2006, 17:02:21 UTC

sighing is good. :)