Whoa shit I obviously did something right today because OMFG!!!!! ADONIS FIC!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
There is so much in this I love! I love that the hint that Adonis was going to go batshit came to fruition and he's so goddamn ice cold cruel! This line: Didn’t the little prince know that there is always someone to hear a tree when it falls in the woods?
DAMN GOOD. Loved it. I really love your description of Zoicite and how bust up and wrecked he is...you've got a real talent for describing a certain element and using just the right words so that the reader can *exactly* picture what you're describing in their mind's eye. The ending paragraph was spot fucking on..I could FEEL his pain. What happened? Why is he still upright if he's so injured? Is Adonis doing it to him??
Speaking of Adonis: let me get this out of my system first.
"FUCK YOU FOR TORTURING ZOI! PIGFUCKER!"
It's incredible how the focus at the start of this series was almost lighthearted: he spent his days fucking Venus and wanting to fuck Kunzite and be him, and now he's turned into this...almost serial killer or something! THe transformation from aspiring rookie to love's bitch to formidable, scary psycho guy has been just fucking fantastic. I mean, at one point, he was going all emo and about to jump off a cliff, and now he's evil, powerful, and toying with one of the Shitennou and by extension, the Prince! I'll quote wohever said: SHIT JUST GOT REAL!
I like how Venus has been pushed out of his mind entirely. I really want to know what went down on the battlefield. I really want to know what Venus's reaction to everything is. You must continue or I'm going to explode.
Kunzite's dead, isn't he? :( I have a feeling he's fucking dunzo.
And in the sequel, by the reliable narrator, if there is no love/sex/anything, V will cry.
This comment probably made 0% sense and I'm sorry I swore so much but when I read good shit, I get all sweary and incoherent.
PLEASE RITE NEXT PART LIKE NOW!!
I'm going to go read Purple Sweater again.
(Also ashamed that your Adonis is EVIL badass and mine's an asshole hipster artist. Your Adonis would EAT my Adonis and spit out his old school Pumas)
Whoa shit I obviously did something right today because OMFG!!!!! ADONIS FIC!!!!!!!! The thought of the next Economics chapter inspired me to continue. :) (Now go write!!! *nudges*)
The ending paragraph was spot fucking on..I could FEEL his pain. What happened? Why is he still upright if he's so injured? Is Adonis doing it to him?? I can't wait till I get to explain that part. Not that that's going to be an easy explanation or anything....(why do I keep digging myself into deeper and deeper into this story?)
Speaking of Adonis: let me get this out of my system first.
"FUCK YOU FOR TORTURING ZOI! PIGFUCKER!" I think we can all safely assume that Adonis will no longer be hiding in your closet. :)
THe transformation from aspiring rookie to love's bitchThis is soooooo my new tagline for this series. This might even be my new journal name I like it so much. Of course it's no "Gah! Kunz is a sex beast!", but a close runner up all the same.
I'll quote wohever said: SHIT JUST GOT REAL! Please please please please tell me that you've see Hot Fuzz!!!! (Who in turn ripped it off from Bad Boys2) There will be no more Adonis until you've seen this movie. *crosses arms and nods head emphatically*
I like how Venus has been pushed out of his mind entirely. I really want to know what went down on the battlefield. I really want to know what Venus's reaction to everything is. You must continue or I'm going to explode. Kunzite's dead, isn't he? :( I have a feeling he's fucking dunzo. Oh that fateful day. An explanation is coming up for what happened. And Venus isn't out of the series quite yet - she still has a thing or two to say about everything. But Kunzite....you'll have to see for yourself. Just remember - I never said whether or not he was the other Shitennou that lead the troops into battle, and I never did mention who his "remaining Shitennou" were either. That being said, I do know how cruel it was of me to throw out a few more infinite possibilities.
And in the sequel, by the reliable narrator, if there is no love/sex/anything, V will cry. If I deliver one of the above, and V cries tears of happiness, is it still a bad thing?
(Also ashamed that your Adonis is EVIL badass and mine's an asshole hipster artist. Your Adonis would EAT my Adonis and spit out his old school Pumas) Thank you - that really made me laugh when I read this. I hope you know that this means there is an epic in the works here (title to be determined)
*que movie trailer man* In a world where only one Adonis could exist - there were 2. This summer - it's Adonis vs. Adonis. The swords and paintbrushes are being thrown down and only 1 man can claim victory. It's yuppie hipster artist vs. love's bitch. Coming soon to a livejournal near you....
You crack me up. Seriously I'm so glad I'm friends with you and a loyal reader no less. Tonight I'm going to get started on your Venus story. I'll try to send you the revised stuff no later than Saturday night or possibly Sunday night.
(Now go write!!! *nudges*) Oh I did. Effing thing's up to 8,165 words and still not done.
I can't wait till I get to explain that part. ME. FUCKING. TOO!!!!! You're killing me here, girl. Killing. Me.
I think we can all safely assume that Adonis will no longer be hiding in your closet. :) I just threw him in the elevator and out on the street. And it's kinda ghetto where I live. Good for him. Fucker.
Please please please please tell me that you've see Hot Fuzz!!!! (Who in turn ripped it off from Bad Boys2) There will be no more Adonis until you've seen this movie.
Have I seen this movie? *scoffs* Have I seen this movie? Have you ever fired both guns while jumping through the air? Have you ever fired one gun while jumping through the air? Have you ever fired your gun in the air while screaming AAAAAH? ;) However I've never seen Bad Boys 2. I'm sure that will eventually be rectified.
That being said, I do know how cruel it was of me to throw out a few more infinite possibilities. Oh zinger butt loving I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON!!!! Like, on one hand, I would like for him to be alive, but on the other, it would make sense if he was toast, but then there is Venus, and I don't know what she knows, and !!!!!! for some reason b/c Zoi is so bust up I want Mercury to be in this too, and Fucking Adonis is all with the crazy, and I'm going to keep whining until you update this!
If I deliver one of the above, and V cries tears of happiness, is it still a bad thing? Tears of happy are good!! Very good! But if it's like the "three sides to every story" fic, then I'm going to implode.
Heh...that would be the shortest epic ever as my Adonis would roll over and die in like 2 seconds.
YOUR ADONIS: I'm the leading general of Venus and a badass warrior who may or may not have wasted Earth's most powerful Shitennou. Also I'm crazy and like torturing Zoisite until he cries.
MY ADONIS: Uh, I like Parliament cigarettes and Starbucks and skinny jeans and things so obscure that you've probably not even heard of them yet. Also I wear Che Guevara shirts.
YOUR ADONIS: I also killed Che Guevara.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: With a Parliament cigarette.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: It was ironic. You guys like irony, right?
MY ADONIS: That is so post-meta. I have to blog this.
YOUR ADONIS: I think I'll go kill Endymion now.
MY ADONIS: I'll go drink Pabst and admire my American Apparel tshirt. It's purple. Purple is ironic.
I AM IN TEARS RIGHT NOW FROM LAUGHING SO HARD!!!!!
YOUR ADONIS: I also killed Che Guevara.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: With a Parliament cigarette.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: It was ironic. You guys like irony, right? I am literally in tears from reading this! I hope you don't mind, but I am going to copy this and make it a journal entry so that whenever I need a good laugh I can read it. (Check out the journal name by the way)
HAHA...now we both have ridiculous journal names and I wouldn't have it any other way!
I found some hilarious pic that was "Hipster bingo" and I fully intend for my Adonis to hit on every square except for "Asian".
Seriously, we should think of doing a serial fic like this...I'll kick something around and post it. First paragraph your adonis, next paragraph is mine...it will be utterly ridiculous.
I found some hilarious pic that was "Hipster bingo" and I fully intend for my Adonis to hit on every square except for "Asian". Please post this pic. :)
Seriously, we should think of doing a serial fic like this...I'll kick something around and post it. First paragraph your adonis, next paragraph is mine...it will be utterly ridiculous Lol! Love it! My Adonis is rolling up his sleeves and he's telling me that it's all fair game. (That, of course, only applies as long as he's winning....because my Adonis is like that)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
There is so much in this I love! I love that the hint that Adonis was going to go batshit came to fruition and he's so goddamn ice cold cruel! This line:
Didn’t the little prince know that there is always someone to hear a tree when it falls in the woods?
DAMN GOOD. Loved it. I really love your description of Zoicite and how bust up and wrecked he is...you've got a real talent for describing a certain element and using just the right words so that the reader can *exactly* picture what you're describing in their mind's eye. The ending paragraph was spot fucking on..I could FEEL his pain. What happened? Why is he still upright if he's so injured? Is Adonis doing it to him??
Speaking of Adonis: let me get this out of my system first.
"FUCK YOU FOR TORTURING ZOI! PIGFUCKER!"
It's incredible how the focus at the start of this series was almost lighthearted: he spent his days fucking Venus and wanting to fuck Kunzite and be him, and now he's turned into this...almost serial killer or something! THe transformation from aspiring rookie to love's bitch to formidable, scary psycho guy has been just fucking fantastic. I mean, at one point, he was going all emo and about to jump off a cliff, and now he's evil, powerful, and toying with one of the Shitennou and by extension, the Prince! I'll quote wohever said: SHIT JUST GOT REAL!
I like how Venus has been pushed out of his mind entirely. I really want to know what went down on the battlefield. I really want to know what Venus's reaction to everything is. You must continue or I'm going to explode.
Kunzite's dead, isn't he? :( I have a feeling he's fucking dunzo.
And in the sequel, by the reliable narrator, if there is no love/sex/anything, V will cry.
This comment probably made 0% sense and I'm sorry I swore so much but when I read good shit, I get all sweary and incoherent.
PLEASE RITE NEXT PART LIKE NOW!!
I'm going to go read Purple Sweater again.
(Also ashamed that your Adonis is EVIL badass and mine's an asshole hipster artist. Your Adonis would EAT my Adonis and spit out his old school Pumas)
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The thought of the next Economics chapter inspired me to continue. :) (Now go write!!! *nudges*)
The ending paragraph was spot fucking on..I could FEEL his pain. What happened? Why is he still upright if he's so injured? Is Adonis doing it to him??
I can't wait till I get to explain that part. Not that that's going to be an easy explanation or anything....(why do I keep digging myself into deeper and deeper into this story?)
Speaking of Adonis: let me get this out of my system first.
"FUCK YOU FOR TORTURING ZOI! PIGFUCKER!"
I think we can all safely assume that Adonis will no longer be hiding in your closet. :)
THe transformation from aspiring rookie to love's bitchThis is soooooo my new tagline for this series. This might even be my new journal name I like it so much. Of course it's no "Gah! Kunz is a sex beast!", but a close runner up all the same.
I'll quote wohever said: SHIT JUST GOT REAL!
Please please please please tell me that you've see Hot Fuzz!!!! (Who in turn ripped it off from Bad Boys2) There will be no more Adonis until you've seen this movie. *crosses arms and nods head emphatically*
I like how Venus has been pushed out of his mind entirely. I really want to know what went down on the battlefield. I really want to know what Venus's reaction to everything is. You must continue or I'm going to explode. Kunzite's dead, isn't he? :( I have a feeling he's fucking dunzo.
Oh that fateful day. An explanation is coming up for what happened. And Venus isn't out of the series quite yet - she still has a thing or two to say about everything. But Kunzite....you'll have to see for yourself. Just remember - I never said whether or not he was the other Shitennou that lead the troops into battle, and I never did mention who his "remaining Shitennou" were either. That being said, I do know how cruel it was of me to throw out a few more infinite possibilities.
And in the sequel, by the reliable narrator, if there is no love/sex/anything, V will cry.
If I deliver one of the above, and V cries tears of happiness, is it still a bad thing?
(Also ashamed that your Adonis is EVIL badass and mine's an asshole hipster artist. Your Adonis would EAT my Adonis and spit out his old school Pumas)
Thank you - that really made me laugh when I read this. I hope you know that this means there is an epic in the works here (title to be determined)
*que movie trailer man* In a world where only one Adonis could exist - there were 2. This summer - it's Adonis vs. Adonis. The swords and paintbrushes are being thrown down and only 1 man can claim victory. It's yuppie hipster artist vs. love's bitch. Coming soon to a livejournal near you....
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I can't wait till I get to explain that part. ME. FUCKING. TOO!!!!! You're killing me here, girl. Killing. Me.
I think we can all safely assume that Adonis will no longer be hiding in your closet. :) I just threw him in the elevator and out on the street. And it's kinda ghetto where I live. Good for him. Fucker.
Please please please please tell me that you've see Hot Fuzz!!!! (Who in turn ripped it off from Bad Boys2) There will be no more Adonis until you've seen this movie.
Have I seen this movie? *scoffs* Have I seen this movie? Have you ever fired both guns while jumping through the air? Have you ever fired one gun while jumping through the air? Have you ever fired your gun in the air while screaming AAAAAH? ;) However I've never seen Bad Boys 2. I'm sure that will eventually be rectified.
That being said, I do know how cruel it was of me to throw out a few more infinite possibilities. Oh zinger butt loving I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON!!!! Like, on one hand, I would like for him to be alive, but on the other, it would make sense if he was toast, but then there is Venus, and I don't know what she knows, and !!!!!! for some reason b/c Zoi is so bust up I want Mercury to be in this too, and Fucking Adonis is all with the crazy, and I'm going to keep whining until you update this!
If I deliver one of the above, and V cries tears of happiness, is it still a bad thing? Tears of happy are good!! Very good! But if it's like the "three sides to every story" fic, then I'm going to implode.
Heh...that would be the shortest epic ever as my Adonis would roll over and die in like 2 seconds.
YOUR ADONIS: I'm the leading general of Venus and a badass warrior who may or may not have wasted Earth's most powerful Shitennou. Also I'm crazy and like torturing Zoisite until he cries.
MY ADONIS: Uh, I like Parliament cigarettes and Starbucks and skinny jeans and things so obscure that you've probably not even heard of them yet. Also I wear Che Guevara shirts.
YOUR ADONIS: I also killed Che Guevara.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: With a Parliament cigarette.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: It was ironic. You guys like irony, right?
MY ADONIS: That is so post-meta. I have to blog this.
YOUR ADONIS: I think I'll go kill Endymion now.
MY ADONIS: I'll go drink Pabst and admire my American Apparel tshirt. It's purple. Purple is ironic.
/FIN
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YOUR ADONIS: I also killed Che Guevara.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: With a Parliament cigarette.
MY ADONIS: ....
YOUR ADONIS: It was ironic. You guys like irony, right?
I am literally in tears from reading this! I hope you don't mind, but I am going to copy this and make it a journal entry so that whenever I need a good laugh I can read it. (Check out the journal name by the way)
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I found some hilarious pic that was "Hipster bingo" and I fully intend for my Adonis to hit on every square except for "Asian".
Seriously, we should think of doing a serial fic like this...I'll kick something around and post it. First paragraph your adonis, next paragraph is mine...it will be utterly ridiculous.
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Please post this pic. :)
Seriously, we should think of doing a serial fic like this...I'll kick something around and post it. First paragraph your adonis, next paragraph is mine...it will be utterly ridiculous
Lol! Love it! My Adonis is rolling up his sleeves and he's telling me that it's all fair game. (That, of course, only applies as long as he's winning....because my Adonis is like that)
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I'll come up with something to start tonight.
And of COURSE your Adonis is going to win. I mean, mofo killed both Kunzite and Che Guevara. You don't fuck with the Adonis!
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