porn battle fic!!

[aliyaskie]

Title: Giving into Temptation
Fandom: Big Love
Pairing: Sarah/Heather
Rating: NC-17
Notes: This is the unabridged version of my piece for oxoniensis' Porn Battle (Fourth Verse, Same as the First). (Abridged version posted here, so I don't have to hunt for it later, LOL.) Un-betaed, although i_am_may read it to try to reassure me that it wasn't complete and utter

Comments

[gods_thestral]

The writing is very good. I just really wish there was a little more lead in... it does jump straight into the thick of it. Your descriptions are as well quite lovely, and word choice is very good. I like that you include some inner thoughts.

Love you