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bastardsnow February 15 2009, 15:39:16 UTC
Nice. I like it. Well done.

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alixtii February 16 2009, 01:35:14 UTC
Thank you!

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drdm February 15 2009, 16:30:54 UTC
COMPLIMENT SANDWICH TIME!

I like the emotional weight that you managed to convey in so few words. The irony of that, considering the subject of the story, is also delicious.

To be blunt, I don't much care for the comics, seeing as how they seem to just take the failings of seventh season and exacerbate them.

You managed to make a sex "scene" fairly hot without being overly explicit or filled with purple prose. Kudos. Or possibly Nutri-grain, whichever cardboard tasting "health bar" you like.

Hmm. Well, the "beef" in the sandwich isn't from you, so I guess that's that! Compliment toast instead?

Also, spotted a typo, second to last paragraph, first sentence. Intertwined.

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alixtii February 16 2009, 01:29:59 UTC
I enjoy the comics as a pleasant diversion, even if I don't consider them canon, but I'm certainly not nearly as invested in them as I am in the series itself. I wrote this story to a Buffy/Satsu prompt, for inlovewithnight's One-Night Stand ficathon.

I'm glad it worked for you emotionally, and that the sex scene worked for you. Thank you!

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alixtii February 16 2009, 01:33:56 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!

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likeadeuce February 15 2009, 20:37:19 UTC
Oh, awesome. And yaaaay, Immortal!

I would really like him to actually show up in the comics one day.

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alixtii February 16 2009, 01:33:31 UTC
Well, I wouldn't want him to appear on-panel--that would take the fun away--but being involved somehow would be nice. You know I'm an Immortal fan. (It may be just the two of us.)

I'm glad you liked the story.

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flyingcarpet February 15 2009, 23:12:32 UTC
Very nice. I love Buffy/Satsu in the comics, and this has the same feel.

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alixtii February 16 2009, 01:36:46 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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