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alittleoddish

In the Rough, chapter 1/40

Feb 12, 2010 14:35

Title: In the Rough (1/40)
Author: alittleoddish
Rating: Teen
Characters: Alice, Hatter, OC
Disclaimer: I don't own any part of Syfy's Alice.
Summary: "But this is starting to sound like a quest! Quests are such a pain, Alice, they really are. All horseback and food rations and traveling in groups and no truly hot tea, with significantly less sex against trees ( Read more... )

table: technical, in the rough, table: inspired-by

Comments 25

quixyjie February 12 2010, 21:04:41 UTC

“Cotton cozy,” he responded, which was something he said now and again that Alice figured mostly meant yes. HAHA So like Hatter.

This looks super interesting and I'm very excited for it!!!

alittleoddish February 12 2010, 21:25:26 UTC

Thanks! ^_^ I love giving Hatter tea-related slang to use -- I think it's adorable.

ayuette February 12 2010, 21:13:22 UTC

Ahhh this is lovely. <3
I quite like the idea of Wonderland being "Leashed" to our world. <3 Very fantastic, surprisingly I haven't seen that too much before either.
You've got an excellent Hatter AND Alice voice.

& you've got me curious with the ending. Can't wait to see where this leads off to!

alittleoddish February 12 2010, 21:28:13 UTC

Haha yeah, that whole time-flux thing was always something that bothered me about fanon/canon. Once I thought about it, "leashing" made the most sense. I'm really big on getting canon *perfect* in my fics -- that's why I'm also picky to make sure that Hatter and Alice both act like they're supposed to.

Anyways, I guess I'm trying to say thanks for noticing! ^_^;; Hope to see you around!

thewritingbug February 12 2010, 21:26:49 UTC

I'm intrigued so far--this promises to be a very interesting story! I absolutely love your writing so I'm looking forward to next Friday.

*gets popcorn*

alittleoddish February 12 2010, 21:37:18 UTC

Oh goodness, really? ~^_^~ Because I'm such a big fan of your writing! I especially love that piece you're doing on David/Hatter right now.

I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning, and I look forward to seeing you around! XD

thewritingbug February 12 2010, 22:46:07 UTC

*squeeks* Thanks! I'm working on more fics at the moment because the David/Hatter story is almost finished.

Also, this from the summary made me giggle unreasonably robustly: "...significantly less sex against trees."

ireland22 February 12 2010, 22:08:10 UTC

i liked this spin of the story, and I'm really interested in who that little girl is.

alittleoddish February 14 2010, 01:44:52 UTC

Thanks! Yeah, that little girl is going to remain a mystery for quite awhile... ^_^ Hope to see you around!

cyprith February 12 2010, 23:09:24 UTC

Wow.

I mean, I don't even have more words than that. This is so perfectly executed, so in character that there is nothing in this world I could possibly point out as wrong and less than nothing I can point out as being my very favorite bit.

Your writing style is just *brilliant*. I love it.

alittleoddish February 14 2010, 01:46:34 UTC

Oh, wow! Thank you for such high praise... I don't really know what to say! ~^_^~ I work really hard on all my chapters to make them as canon as possible, it's something that's incredibly important to me and I'm glad that it's paying off.

I hope to see you around as I post more! ♥