This is a brilliant story! Only one mistake I spotted through the chapters that sort of confused me is when you put "father's" instead of "fathers'". Because then I got confused if Harry's child belonged to the 3 of them or just 2.
I just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story. It is so original to make all 3 of them Lilliam's fathers. You have a wonderful imagination & I cannot wait for the remaining chapters. Hope to see some soon...I check for them every few days....lol. Keep up the great work
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