Comments | alimoseby: The Door 4/5

alimoseby

The Door 4/5

Jul 03, 2013 10:50

Here is the fourth part. It's set a little ahead of the rest. Sylvia and Wilf are mentioned, but not seen. All other pertinent notes are in the AN for part 1.

As always I don't own Ten, Donna, Ten II, or Doctor Who. The BBC does. Please read and enjoy...

( Tau Sigma )

fiction, tenth doctor, doctor who, ten ii, donna noble, pg-13

Comments 13

bas_math_girl July 4 2013, 00:38:28 UTC

Aww, the image of them in the Gallifreyan garden was really sweet. As was the kissing that topped and tailed this. :D

Shame about the Sylvia slap in light of this, but you can't have everything.

alimoseby July 4 2013, 05:46:58 UTC

I really really like how Gallifrey has been described and shown on the show and in other folk's fics. It sounds so pretty and relaxing. A Gallifreyan garden seems like the perfect place for a nap. =D Also...you can never have enough kissing. ;)

I debated how to have Sylvia handle it. The slap seemed inevitable when I realized that Tau would be sort of a combo of Donna and Theta. Theta doesn't always think before he speaks, and Donna tells it like it is. =D

Glad you like it, and thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥

tkel_paris July 4 2013, 04:14:43 UTC

(Aw, the Land Before Time! I remember when Pizza Hut was giving out puppets of the five main characters. *squees* :D)

Yeah, I'd imagine that neither of the twins terribly wants to know exactly what the others does with Donna. That'd be awkward. ;) But it's cute how Donna went to curl against her husband for a resting nap. :D

Yeah, the telling wasn't going to go over well. Now they've both been slapped... and got Wilf an adventure of his own. Well, are they really surprised that she'd slap them over that?

And now I can't begin to imagine how you're going to close this series. Am looking forward to it. :D

alimoseby July 4 2013, 05:53:04 UTC

(She loves those movies almost as much as she loves Barney. She'll call out their names randomly while watching. Today it was Petrie. Last time it was Littlefoot. Or as she says: Peetwee and Lihfoo. =D)

When I was writing this part, I thought it would be sweet if after they spent time together, they would go sit with either Theta or Tau and just be together. If that makes sense...

They have both been slapped. =P No they really shouldn't be surprised. And I have often thought that Wilf should have been taken on an adventure at least once while Donna travelled with the Doctor. That would have made for an epic episode.

I hope the ending lives up to the interest. =D

~Ali ♥

tkel_paris July 4 2013, 06:29:07 UTC

(I haven't seen anything past the original. I enjoyed the movies, and I can imagine how much she is. *aws over the pronunciations*)

It is sweet. I love it. :D

Oh, that would've been fun!!!! :D Oh, imagine Wilf with them for "The Unicorn and the Wasp"! *giggles*

Looking forward to it. :DDD

alimoseby July 4 2013, 06:41:59 UTC

(Netflix has most of the movies, but oddly not the original. O_o)

Oh I can hear Wilf now after seeing the Vespiform. "Oh! Alien insect!"

dm12 July 4 2013, 09:00:20 UTC

Sweet how they worked things out between the three of them. No, they wouldn't want to know what's going on with the other... the garden sounded lovely and peaceful.

There was no way to avoid someone getting a Sylvia slap, and each got his turn. Tau really does seem to be a combination of Donna and the Doctor, speaks without thinking and tells it like he sees it, but doesn't babble. He was right; if Theta did the explaining, they'd have still been there while he spouted all his technobabble! Sigh... should be interesting when Donna has a baby, though; it's bound to happen sometime.

Wilf on an adventure! No harm done in the end, and I think he was delighted to get away.

alimoseby July 5 2013, 06:36:45 UTC

I want a garden like it. Sadly I can't grow anything but mold apparently. =P

Donna having a baby... hmm... Hadn't thought of that actually. Perhaps I should.

Wilf deserves an adventure or ten. =D

Thank you for the comments. I'm glad you liked it.

~Ali ♥

earthgirl2008 July 5 2013, 02:46:24 UTC

Aww that was lovely and quite sweet! Love the whole slapping bit but course, that's just me! I'm a slapper! Welll not in the dictionary sense! I give the Doctor a good slap every once in a while! LOL!

alimoseby July 5 2013, 06:37:49 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you so much for the comments.

~Ali ♥

earthgirl2008 July 5 2013, 20:19:12 UTC

I love commenting and I suppose talking is just my thing so hope you're prepared for lots of comments from me! LMAO! :D And you're more than welcome! ;)

eloriekam July 6 2013, 00:22:38 UTC

Ahh, slapping. I see Tau inherited a slightly less-than-ideal sense of tact from somewhere!

Also liked: Theta objecting to the idea that he babbles, the mental image of walking fish. And, of course, Donna threatening to get in a slap of her own (hope it doesn't say anything too bad about me that I like her willingness to smack him).

(Your location says you're in OR? I've been through various parts of the state a few times and loved it all--the Columbia Gorge, the US-97 corridor through Bend, a bit of the northern coast, and the northern I-5 corridor. Moderately nice weather too, though I'd find all the rain odd now!)

alimoseby July 6 2013, 05:49:11 UTC

You can't have a fic where Sylvia and Donna are involved and not have at least one slap. =D The walking fish were inspired by my foster daughter and her new found love for The Land Before Time.

(I am from Oregon. Southern Willamette Valley. =))

Glad you liked it, and thank you for the comments.

~Ali ♥