Her Beauty Shone, Like a Flower Grown

[alimoseby]

Here, finally is the wedding oneshot.  Again, I'm not that great with het romance and such, but this is one attempt.  Not that there's a lot.  It starts in Belle's POV, then goes to Donna's, then Ten's, and finally both Ten and Donna.  Page breaks denote POV changes.  I didn't focus too much on the wedding itself, since it's Martha and Mickey's but

Comments

[babumonkey]

Cliffhanger! Oh my goodness, this is fantastic! You're explanations of how Belle sees, what she notices is always interesting and I love how you have the Doctor and Donna interact. And I can't wait to hear the conversation between them now!

[alimoseby]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. =) I didn't intend on a cliffy, but well...it happened.

I'll be working on their conversation soon.

Thank you so much for your comments.

~Ali♥

[tkel_paris]

*applauds* Now this was a nice trio! I'm in awe! :D

And finally it comes out! Guessing the TARDIS wants them to chat some more. Or...something else. :P

Again, bravo! :D

[alimoseby]

I'm glad you liked it. =)

Yes, the TARDIS wants them to talk and not leave. ;)

Thank you so much for your comments.

~Ali♥

[serenityslady]

“Because you’re mine!”

Well, it's about time! :D He can never just come out an admit it, can he!? And Donna's a bit oblivious too.

Love this whole series. Keep them coming!

[alimoseby]

He can't just admit to it, no. He must be forced into it sort of. And yeah, I guess Donna is pretty clueless at them moment. She knows how he feels now, but she's a bit unknowing of her own feelings. =P

Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the comments.

~Ali♥

[serenityslady]

Donna's been treated sompoorly by everyone in the past, it's not surprising she doesn't believe he could feel deeply for her.

No thanks necessary. That's why we're all here, to support each other.

[alimoseby]

She really has, so perhaps there's some denial there, that any feelings she has towards him could be returned.

I always thank people. It's a habit carried over from JonasFic where I've posted fic for three or so years. It seems like the polite thing to do. :)

[sykira]

I'm so excited to see more of this! LOVE the direction it is going and catalyst!Jack = jealous!Doctor is one of my favorite things EVER! Beautiful how you wove in the issues with Bella walking and I love that Ianto escorted her, perfect choice ♥

[alimoseby]

I love Jack. He provided the perfect catalyst. He usually does. =P Just enough to make Ten jealous.

It made me angry when Ianto was killed off. Thus in my universe he lived. =D And he is perfect to be Belle's walking partner, isn't he. All of us need an Ianto Jones in our lives. =)

Thank you so much for your comments.

~Ali♥

[sykira]

Yeah I forget they killed off Ianto cause everything I read and write just ignores that silliness.

[alimoseby]

That's what makes fanfic fun. You don't have to be a stickler for canon. =D

[motoko1969]

Great job but what an ending... I need more of this, as in right now :D !!!
This was priceless, and the wedding on a beach in Hawaii *dreamy eyes mode ON*

Lovely piece of work you have provided looking forward to the next part :D ! Cheers to you.

[alimoseby]

I'm going to be starting the next one soon. It was pouring down rain here when I got the beach in Hawaii idea. My brain wanted sun, sand, and surf. =D

Thank you so much for your comments.

~Ali♥