I have words again

[alierak]

when the
automatic caution door
swallowed me whole
once before
it stole
all the people and the sun
took a vacation
from fun
but none
of the serious slush
shut me inside
the hush
just died

Comments

[kareila]

The phrase "automatic caution door" brings back good memories. I love you.

[lite]

Could you explain what this otherwise random babble is about then?
I assumed it was Rak quoting a song.

[kareila]

He wasn't quoting anything, and he'll probably be hurt that you called his poetry random babble.

[lite]

Whoops :p Did I put my foot in it?
It's still fairly freaky, Rak. :)
Not freaky in a necessarily bad way, as I revel in the freaky (again: TMBG)

[alierak]

Why would I be hurt? LITE didn't have any way to know what it meant :)

[kareila]

I keep thinking you're as hypersensitive as I am.