Comments | alien_writings: Settling a Debt

alien_writings

Settling a Debt

Aug 14, 2013 21:50

“Tell me why I’m coming with you again?” Gareth muttered, narrowing his eyes at his friend Brody.

( They walked along the city street between squat buildings. )

short story, trigger: violence, original fiction, 500themes, rating: pg-13

Comments 3

halfshellvenus August 16 2013, 00:02:45 UTC

I'm glad you didn't tell me which prompt you'd used, because it would have spoiled the twist in this story.

Poor Gareth-- all of those ominous feelings were right, and now we know why Brody wasn't worried by any of them. Only one of them was actually in danger.

Nice to trigger some writing for you, after all of the help you've given me with various prompts! :)

alien_writings August 16 2013, 00:21:49 UTC

Thanks for the comment. :)

This was definitely a "twist" story, so I really couldn't tell you which prompt I used, lol. I hope the twist worked and wasn't too obvious.

halfshellvenus August 16 2013, 00:38:28 UTC

Yes, it did-- Gareth was so worked up that it was only in retrospect that I could see how blase Brody was.

And now we know why. :O