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alien_writings

The Church and Its Orbs - Chapter 4 Redo

Apr 18, 2013 13:47

I'm rewriting my Gemma story, which is tentatively titled The Church and Its Orbs. This a redo of the fourth chapter. The previous chapters are linked below.
Prologue | 1 | 2 | 3

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“I can’t wait until they start handing out Sweetheart Flowers,” Lila sighs, looking lost in thought.

( I nod and try to smile. )

pov: gemma, writerverse: table of doom, character: wren, series: the church and its orbs, 500themes, character: gemma, character: kai, original fiction, writerverse, character: ruby

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pixiebelle April 19 2013, 18:15:36 UTC

Oh so Lila got the flower from Oliver after all? I know you mentioned that Gemma might get it. I'm glad Lila did for now... And Kai and Wren... Nice :)

The sweetheart flower still reminds me of silly things we did in high school too.

I like what you did with the this!

alien_writings April 24 2013, 15:14:59 UTC

I'm glad the goofy tradition seems like it's actually true to life. This may be a weird dystopian world, but they are still in high school, and it's good to have your fantasy grounded in some reality.