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alien_writings

Her Old Mage Mentor

Jan 01, 2013 00:10

This is Part Twenty Six in The Meeting of Breccan & Finbar. Trigger warning for mention of rape.

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Maris glanced at Nico. “Can you try not to look so -- excessively pretty? Your human disguise is painfully obvious.”

( 'But my eyes are blue, and I'm dressed correctly,' Nico said. )

character: nico, series: gods and shadow creatures, pairing: nico/breccan, character: maris, 500themes, character: finbar, character: isabel, character: breccan, trigger: rape

Comments 4

theun4givables January 1 2013, 13:59:16 UTC

oh man. I kinda feel bad for Nico; I really do think he wants to change. Obviously Breccan does, too. I like Clara so far; she's very no-nonsense and that is especially needed in this unviverse, lol.

I do think she's being a little judgmental, but i'm sure there's one hell of a reason for that. ;)

alien_writings January 1 2013, 16:37:52 UTC

The women in this verse tend to be FAR more no-nonsense than the men, heh. Breccan, for example, is not someone I would call "no-nonsense," haha. Nor is Nico particularly no-nonsense. The same goes for Finbar and his very much failed Operation Jealousy, lol.

n3m3sis43 January 1 2013, 17:46:15 UTC

Aww, poor Nico. I believe he wants to change, but if Clara's had personal experience with more typical gods I can see why she wouldn't. Isabel is just rude. Like, yeah, survivors have a right to tell their stories and it's not anyone's place to tell them when they are and aren't allowed to do so. But why do I get the feeling Isabel told it here JUST to cause trouble?

Clara seems... interesting. It will be fun to learn more about her. :)

alien_writings January 1 2013, 21:04:01 UTC

You think that because she probably DID tell her story then just to cause trouble. She kind of likes causing trouble for people, I think, which is why she was more than willing to go along with Finbar's Operation Jealousy couch shenanigans while knowing what he was doing.

Clara is -- well, you know what she does next, haha.