The Laughing Sun

Dec 19, 2012 15:37

This is the "holiday fic" pixiebelle requested from me. She wanted me to continue this story, so I did. I hope she likes it!

---------Everyone - gone. Nobody, there was nobody left. Brynn tried to still her racing heart, but it was no use. How could she stop the panic when everyone had died? They - her whole community had killed themselves over an ( Read more... )

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n3m3sis43 December 20 2012, 13:10:07 UTC
Ooh, I really enjoyed this. This was one of my favorite stories that Pixie did for Idol and I think your extension of it was really fitting. I can't remember if the wall was part of the original story or not (I guess I should go back and read it) but I'm glad there are still people alive on the other side of it. I like how this story ended with a tiny bit of hope. Really nicely done. :D

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alien_writings December 20 2012, 16:34:04 UTC
Aw, I'm glad you liked this so much. :)

I'm happy you thought it was fitting. That's one of the scary things about fanfiction, getting it to fit with the tone of the canon.

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pixiebelle December 20 2012, 20:07:58 UTC
I really liked this! I think it sounds like a very fitting extension and would make for an interesting novel of sorts perhaps. What happens after the end of the world? Apparently people keep on living.

I think you made her brave and wrote it where it flowed flawlessly with mine!

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