This is the fifth chapter in a fanfiction of
The Tomorrow Series by
theun4givables.
Chapter 1,
Chapter 2,
Chapter 3,
Chapter 4 ---------Jazz pulled his cap down to keep his conspicuous blond hair covered. As he moved through the streets of this particular slum, he tried to remain aware of his surroundings. Having been on the run before, he knew he had to stay
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I love that Ravi ended up helping out Jazz and patching him up enough to be okay. Of course, we all know that won't last long. Jazz's body doesn't do well with gunshot wounds. It just doesn't.
I'm also kinda impressed that Savin took so long to throw up. I guess everything just hit him all at once. Like the shock of his wife and kid being dead wore off and now reality is setting in and dude, he is not going to handle that well. Not at all. xD
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Nope, Jazz isn't exactly going to do well with the traveling with gunshot wounds. Too bad he really couldn't just stay at Ravi's house. Man, is he gonna get a shock when he finally makes it to the desert compound!
Savin kind of reached "shitty things critical mass," and it was just too much once he heard of the NB Purge and had a chance for everything to sink in. Nope, he will NOT handle things well, unfortunately for both him and Jazz.
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I loved our description of the shop. So desperate and desolate. You know one thing I'd like to see? Savin being incapable of good judgment while on the run. Because he's got no experience with that and sometimes lacks common sense. Think a less-extreme version of Vivian.
Funny to see your namesake reporter character here.
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