NaNo Ridiculousness Chapter 12

[alien_writings]

Hey there,

Here's Chapter 12 of "I Prefer the Mind Control." I'm trying to make actual chapters now. Enjoy the NSFW ridiculousness!

Day 1, Day 2, Day 3, Day 4, Day 5(ish), Chapter 6, Chapter 7, Chapter 8, Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11

---------With the strange thing possessing me, moving was more than a little difficult. Xan's power nearly

Comments

[theun4givables]

I understand that Soulbreaking is supposed to be terrifying in theory to a human being. Because I mean, it SOUNDS terrifying, lol. But I love that Dylan is totally and completely willing to the point where Xan has to slow down the process a bit. To make him wait for just the perfect moment to do it.

I'm guessing penetration is the perfect moment to do it? lololol This was hot, too. I like that Dylan literally cannot fight back. No chances of second thoughts getting in the way I guess. ;) Even though the door should have sensed that, anyway.

[alien_writings]

The Scientifically Ridiculous Door should have prevented anybody with second thoughts from entering the room that way, but the Soulbreaking process itself won't work unless a person is willing, even if said door somehow malfunctions or you're not rich enough to have a magic door at your Soulbreaking. And, boy, is Dylan willing, haha. Yup, no worries about his having second thoughts. His problem is, like you mentioned, being almost too willing, lol.