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alien_writings

NaNo Ridiculousness Day 3

Nov 04, 2012 09:21

Hey there,

Here's Day 3 of "I Prefer the Mind Control." Enjoy the NSFW ridiculousness!

Day 1, Day 2

---------While I worried about my sexiness, Xan apparently didn't. Those looks he kept shooting me? Helpful when I was a little confidence-deficient. Aliens may have mind-boggling taste, but they did appear to want me, odd as it was. I suppose ( Read more... )

nanowrimo, nano novel 2012, character: dylan, nsfw (actual sexual content - really!), character: xan, character: jirrin, trigger: dubcon, character: berri, series: i prefer the mind control

Comments 4

theun4givables November 4 2012, 15:05:37 UTC

lol I love this. It's hot and hilarious and it's a lot of fun. :D

Keep Dylan around for forever, please. <3 I love how he thinks he's a peasant when he really isn't anymore. And how pervy the Zimarans are, if you think about it. Making their "pets" wear skimpy outfits and whatnot. Mmm.

alien_writings November 4 2012, 16:14:46 UTC

Haha, the Zimarans are definitely pervy.

I'm glad you're enjoying this so much! :D

n3m3sis43 November 5 2012, 01:24:45 UTC

Hahahaha, I love the fact that you lampshaded the fact that EVERYONE IN THIS DAMN STORY IS A FUCKING MARY SUE. Hilarious. :D

The clothing that actually makes you more naked is a favorite of mine, too. Guess it makes sense since Dylan's main function seems to be to please the eyes and *ahem* other body parts of Xan and all his friends. Well, as long as Dylan's happy with it (which he certainly seems to be), who am I to complain?

alien_writings November 5 2012, 16:29:32 UTC

The Zimarans' Hat on their Planet of Hats is being Mary Sues lol. ^_^

Extra-naked clothes are fun! :D