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[alicia_michelle]

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[crazeydazey]

it was very vivid...i could definitely see it happening in my head like a movie.

if i didnt know anything about it i would be scared for you then, sad, then happy because you learned so much throught it.

The first paragraph really set the tone
I don't think you should change a thing.

[alicia_michelle]

Thanks for responding!!! i <3 you for that

[_silentdreamer]

wow, that was really good.. you did a good job at using imagery.

dont change a thing but go back and check grammer.. =D

[alicia_michelle]

I actually always do the grammer at the last bit because i change shit alot, but anyway thanks for the comment!!!!

[mother_sexton]

As onlyl my baby girl could have written it......... :( sorry that it hurt u sooooooooo badly......... :(