That is one great little ficlet. I've honestly read so many fics in the past couple of days that I can't even keep track of them all, but this one really stands out. *worships* n_n
*puzzles* it takes a bit of work to understand it...
you write a lot of what they think and rarely what they do... (there i go again, analysing styles. sorry.) it's really good, once i struggled through it. i like the last bit the best.
I can definitely see how it could be confusing. My 15minfic posts usually are; I barely ever have an idea about what I'm going to write about, so I end up switching from scene to scene without transition. In this case, I do my "let's write from a futuristic point of view but not tell anyone what happened inbetween."
a lot of what they think and rarely what they do Once I read that, I thought about it and yeah, I totally do. I think it's how I manage to be poetic, seeing as I can't write dialogue and what not to save my life.
I'm really glad you liked it once you understood it. I appreciate the comments. :)
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you write a lot of what they think and rarely what they do... (there i go again, analysing styles. sorry.) it's really good, once i struggled through it. i like the last bit the best.
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a lot of what they think and rarely what they do
Once I read that, I thought about it and yeah, I totally do. I think it's how I manage to be poetic, seeing as I can't write dialogue and what not to save my life.
I'm really glad you liked it once you understood it. I appreciate the comments. :)
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