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Oct 02, 2010 06:19

title. the black cat with white boots
prompt. chrome
pairing. Ichigo, Orihime
rating. K
disclaimer. applied - Bleach, Ichigo, Orihime belong to Kubo Tite.
for. Hali Challenge 2010 here

i hate to be where she is not )

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alice_candy October 4 2010, 12:47:49 UTC
oh is it? but yeah, at least they are together! thanks for reading.

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xelijahbabe07x October 1 2010, 23:25:51 UTC
I love how it jumps around. I srsly think that's an awesome touch. But when are your ideas ever not awesome? ;) I liked this hardcore.

I really enjoyed his little statement about running away. So sweet. Great job bb. ^^

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alice_candy October 4 2010, 12:52:35 UTC
ehee :D thank you so much! ^_^ i'm glad you like it! also! i'm still working on the smut fic i promised - i'm just having a problem on how to conclude it D: but i will definitely finish it! ^__^

thanks so much again for the feedback! :))

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xelijahbabe07x October 4 2010, 16:38:53 UTC
Well of course! You deserve any and all praise you receive. You are truly talented, my friend. I adore everything you write. =3

Omg srsly? You are too sweet! I'm so excited! Plz, take your time. I'm just flattered that you're doing it for me. <3

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crystaldawn October 1 2010, 23:51:04 UTC
Aww, this made me tear up a little! But it's so sweet! And what a sweet kitty! ♥

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alice_candy October 4 2010, 12:53:32 UTC
it's a weird kitty but yup, nevertheless, a sweet kitty! thank you so much! :D

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sarcasmmonster October 2 2010, 00:32:06 UTC
Honey brown eyes widen, flare and brighten.

THIS LINE. I love it. And by love, I mean I'm kind of in love with it.

You're such a good writer, your style is so unique and gorgeous, man.

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alice_candy October 4 2010, 12:59:17 UTC
i finally remembered where i saw the girl in your icon 8D

thank you so much :D i'm so glad you like it! and thank you for your kind words - you're so nice :))

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sweety8587 October 2 2010, 10:18:52 UTC
i can picture this as an episode...maybe not 20 full mins but...a nice short. and I can see it all in my head. thats the power of your descriptions - its so vivid and easy to imagine everything thats being put down in words <3

need i plead again for you to take me on as your Padawan? XD

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alice_candy October 4 2010, 13:03:45 UTC
sweety! *___* thank you so much! you're so nice, thank you for your kind words! i'm happy you like it :) i like this piece a lot, kinda easy and very simple. 8D

thanks very much again!

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