You're trying to kill me, aren't you. Yes you are. Too cruel, too cruel, too cruel. I shouldn't feel delicious shivers at seeing Harry so broken.
A tad too American at times. (Am I strange for feeling that way? Perhaps it's terms like 'trashed' and 'hanging around' in the first few paragraphs. But I'm not an expert on British English either... I'm just not American. Don't mind me...)
You know, you're right. I'm very slangy in RL but usually I keep it out of the fic; I think I wrote this too quickly to see errors. Or something. Thanks for the tip.
oooooooooo. you do a lot of limbo-things, don't you? and you know i'm not talking about the party game, though that is awesome as well.... i guess. i like it a lot, especially the idea of harry snorting charms like cocaine.
how does he know that the shade matches almost exactly?
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A tad too American at times. (Am I strange for feeling that way? Perhaps it's terms like 'trashed' and 'hanging around' in the first few paragraphs. But I'm not an expert on British English either... I'm just not American. Don't mind me...)
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ahahaha. that's beautiful. oh man. *wipes tear from eye*
in sepia tones, with interesting angles, and a score by Philip Glass.
hee!
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how does he know that the shade matches almost exactly?
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er. hermione tells him?
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I think you broke me. Wow.
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