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aliaspiral

Hairspray fic: Shirts and Sandwiches

Oct 19, 2007 01:14

Title: Shirts and Sandwiches
Author: alianora
Rating: PG
Summery: This is all thegranddewru's fault. I just want to make that clear up front.

When Tracy calls home.

( Is that her? Does she need bail money? )

hairspray fic

Comments 14

thegranddewru October 19 2007, 14:50:48 UTC

She stole his shirt! Lmao!

Oh that was fun! How cute that he was sleeping in her bed with her picture. And I liked the talk on the phone, well done. The subtle confession and him wanting to help. Excellent. Thank you for writing it!

aliaspiral October 20 2007, 02:21:57 UTC

I really just wanted him to be half naked in her house when she wasnt there. Because Im twisted like that. Equally twisted would be admitting Im trying to find a way to work it in as a theme...Link, randomly half/all naked, at Tracy's house..and not for any fun reason at all!

*grins* at least I wrote it, and now, its out of my system! you shall not infect me again! (unless, of course, you can help me work out an AU where Link DOES march, because I really want him standing there looking pale and uneasy, and confessing that he might throw up. because im weird like that).

im glad you liked it!

jewel_2 October 19 2007, 16:05:08 UTC

How cute. I love how Link hints that he was worried about her and that he cares about her. I laughed at what was happening over at the Turnblad house, Link getting some many sandwiches and walking around bare chested because Wilbur was showing him one of his tricks. I thought it was cute that Link fell asleep on Tracy's bed. Too cute of a story. Good job.

aliaspiral October 20 2007, 02:24:32 UTC

thanks! i had fun writing it!

jessica3311 October 19 2007, 17:16:36 UTC

Awww I loved it....I wish this happened in the movie lol..very cute:)

aliaspiral October 20 2007, 02:25:42 UTC

ah, but then i couldnt have enjoyed writing it so much. :) thanks for reading!

ycardaria October 19 2007, 20:35:13 UTC

*total squee*

aliaspiral October 20 2007, 02:35:30 UTC

*beams* Yay!

wyntertwilight October 21 2007, 15:17:04 UTC

This. Was. So. AWESOME! That was brilliant! Funny and sweet, all rolled into one!!! I fricking adored it. I love that Link nervously revealed that he cared about Tracy, and her shy reaction to it all, it was just too cute.

Lmao at the whole shirt thing, and Link's adorable naivety/vanity. This was generally just a great read, awesome work!

aliaspiral October 22 2007, 06:19:11 UTC

*beams* thanks! Im glad it worked out so well. Thanks for reading!