Firefly Fic: Raised Right (Jaylee Fic, 1/4)

[aliaspiral]

Title: Raised Right (1/4)
Author: alianora
Rating: PG13
Summery: Kaylee ain’t the kinda girl you just mess around with. She’s the kinda girl you court proper.
Serenity spoilers
A/N: Massive thanks to rinalin, zoe_jayne, and thegranddewru for the encouragement, the kicks in the pants, and the listening to me whine. And the random lines of dialogue

Comments

[rinalin]

*Sniffles*

Jayne is so adorable. Just adorable. Standing watch over her, if Simon came back... I'm sure Jayne would be down there in a second telling him to back off, damage done.

[aliaspiral]

*grins* probably..but only if Kaylee got upset-er..unless Simon decided to get down there by walking past Jayne..

[showmelonely]

I love protector Jayne. I can't wait for tomorrow.

[aliaspiral]

thanks! and the whole thing is now posted, i hipe you noticed. :)

[showmelonely]

I read itr all and I adored it!

You're a doll. Please keep up the awesome stories so I can have my Jaylee fix.

[thegranddewru]

I like that bit about the wieght, so very Jayne. I can't wait to get to the rest!

[thegranddewru]

urgh... weights. Need to proof read my comments :p

[aliaspiral]

*beams* thanks! but hey, without your help, i probably wouldnt have gotten past part 2!

[buffygirl43]

Aww, very sweet. Jayne is her knight in shining armor...or knight with big guns.... whichever you prefer. :) Can't wait for the next part!

[aliaspiral]

hee! he so is!

thanks for reading!

[wily_one24]

You promised us more, so I'm waiting. Very nice imagery in this, about Kaylee being broken in two, something Jayne would think. I like it.

[aliaspiral]

Thanks for reading!