Comments | alias500: response to challenge "seasons"

melanie_anne in alias500

response to challenge "seasons"

Dec 15, 2005 14:16

Title: Chill
Author: Melanie-Anne
Rating: T
Disclaimer: Not my characters, alas.
Characters: Laura/Irina, Jack
A/N: For alias500 challenge "seasons".

( . . . there's only silence. And Jack . . . )

author: melanie anne, challenge: seasons

Comments 6

wottie December 15 2005, 07:33:08 UTC

Awwwww.

I love the ending. Good work!

melanie_anne December 15 2005, 07:41:35 UTC

Hee, thank you :o)

laet_v December 15 2005, 07:48:41 UTC

Wonderfull!
Sad and a little bitter, melancolic but not melodramatic, you write just the better way.

melanie_anne December 15 2005, 10:14:01 UTC

Ohh, thank you ::beams::

yahtzee63 December 15 2005, 14:59:34 UTC

This is lovely -- the separation between Jack and Irina that Jack can't close, and that Irina clings to despite hating. And I like her missing her sisters, too, the little moments that intrude into her day-to-day thoughts. Sweet and melancholy -- sigh.

melanie_anne December 15 2005, 15:13:47 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.