Comments | alias500: Response #1 to Rewind

derevko_child in alias500

Response #1 to Rewind - What If?

Jul 14, 2008 21:02

It took me like, a week to finish this. :D

( Whir and Buzz )

author: derevko child, challenge: what if

Comments 5

yahtzee63 July 18 2008, 21:03:26 UTC

Ooooh, wonderful! I hadn't seen this one before -- this is a wonderful, happier ending. :D

derevko_child July 19 2008, 05:52:19 UTC

Thanks :D I heart happy endings. :)

raptor47 July 18 2008, 21:14:24 UTC

I missed this one as well. Happily ever after for the SpyRents! You've captured both Jack and Irina beautifully. I especially like this sentence:

She was observing him, almost with morbid fascination, but concern was also in her eyes.

So perfectly Irina.

derevko_child July 19 2008, 05:55:52 UTC

Thank you :D

Irina's like a cat that likes to stare at its owner for no reason at all. Hehehe

mizzykitty July 20 2008, 01:28:31 UTC

Oh yay, a happily ever after! Awww!