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alias424

Chaos Theory: Chapter 5

Jan 20, 2008 20:00

Hi, all! Sorry for the wait on this one, but with it being the last chapter, the perfectionist in me reared its ugly head and just couldn't let this go until some parts were justright. Or at least close, lol. This one goes out to
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Comments 33

ashley_west January 21 2008, 02:02:10 UTC

ALIAS!!! YOU'RE BACK!!
Loved, loved this. Death by Succubus, death by cleavage, and Brenda. I could not be happier^^ Do we have anything new to look forward to? But anyway, thank you for another great read.

because there was nowhere run
(is it missing a 'to'?)

alias424 January 21 2008, 02:30:56 UTC

I don't have anything in mind right now. Maybe eventually, once my muse kicks in again. :)

Not anymore, it's not. Shows what I get for trying to edit while eating dinner....

ashley_west January 21 2008, 02:39:56 UTC

Heh. The other day I posted this short story and I didn't even notice one of my characters had two names because I'd changed my mind of the name I wanted to call her when I edited. Self-editing makes the eyes water...

elliejgirl January 21 2008, 02:18:21 UTC

**Sigh** That was great. House's internal monologue both during and after the kiss was perfect and very in character.

alias424 January 21 2008, 02:33:20 UTC

Inner House monologue is so much fun that I actually had to put on the breaks before it got too insane.

I know I comment on your icons just about every time, but that has got to be the cutest thing in the world. Hee.

speckleberry January 21 2008, 02:38:12 UTC

aww, you write House/Cuddy so fabulously i have a hard time remembering what was in an episode and what was in your fics. Wow, this was fantastic!! I can't wait to read whatever you come up with next!

alias424 January 21 2008, 14:46:16 UTC

Especially when we haven't had a new episode in what feels like years. I'm going to be so confused when we do finally get something new and it doesn't match anything from the fic world.... And thanks so much!

shikabane_mai January 21 2008, 02:43:15 UTC

Ha! You're as psyched about the Perverse-verse as I am! ;) If anyone hasn't read it, then they're missing out on A LOT!

ANYWAY! Reading the first part of your fic really made me die a death of spontaneous combustion. Can there be any hotter scene?! I loved the kiss, loved the way you described it, and basically loved every bit of it to death.

My favourite line of all: but-most importantly-evidence when the police found his body, the medical examiner still scratching his head even after the autopsy had been performed. He wouldn’t be able to blame them when inconclusive was all that appeared under ‘Cause of Death’-death by succubus simply wasn’t all that common in this day and age.
Again: I'm still in awe of how the hell you come up with such good metaphors and I dont' think I'll ever get over it!

2nd fave: though when she let her eyes trail down below his waist to make her point, he almost had to admit defeatYou had me laughing like crazy on this one! xD (even though I was trying so hard not to laugh because it's 1:30am here and ( ... )

alias424 January 21 2008, 14:50:35 UTC

I LOVE getting to see all your reactions to different lines. :) I hope you didn't get in trouble! I'd say I'd try to write something more serious next time, but with House....

Nope, nothing else planned for right now. I'm waiting for gidget's evil-fanged plot bunnies to bite one of mine and transmit its awesome powers.

amy_119 January 21 2008, 04:58:39 UTC

This story was awesome! I absolutely loved every chapter. You write House's sarcasm so well. Great job! :)

alias424 January 21 2008, 14:51:18 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!