I need to relax... my heart is beating so fast right now, I was as afraid as Aiji must have benn all the time... Great job my dear!
there were sentences that hurt to the core, others were close to make me smile... I will read this about ten times again I think.. It's so full of emotions! But.... what is Jun feeling? What? Hedoesn't seem to be too sure abut this, is the second kiss some kind of experiment? Or is it because he feels so sorry for Aiji, too? What to write now...
that would be a good last part you know... the last sentences really do it, he can dream again... he wants to share his dreams... can one possibly get a greater present than that?
What I meant to say in this, is that Jun still doesn't realize what's he's feeling in 100%. But it's not like he's only feing sorry for Aiji. It's not because of that. He has these glimpses of being complete, of being totally at peace and that's what happenes when he kisses Aiji ^^" he's just acting upon those emotions that make him feel that he's somewhere he belongs. not thinking what are they... uuuh i'm confusing this up aren't I? -.-
a greater present...? well I could think of few but that would rise the rating of this story XD
I always make my lemons pretty intense :) maybe because ehy leave some things to the imagination... I hate lemons that's are TOO graphic
aaah I'm sure you will think of something ^^ you had problems with the previous part too, and you ended up with your co-writer and daughter catching their breaths
there were sentences that hurt to the core, others were close to make me smile... I will read this about ten times again I think.. It's so full of emotions!
But.... what is Jun feeling? What? Hedoesn't seem to be too sure abut this, is the second kiss some kind of experiment? Or is it because he feels so sorry for Aiji, too?
What to write now...
that would be a good last part you know... the last sentences really do it, he can dream again... he wants to share his dreams... can one possibly get a greater present than that?
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What I meant to say in this, is that Jun still doesn't realize what's he's feeling in 100%. But it's not like he's only feing sorry for Aiji. It's not because of that. He has these glimpses of being complete, of being totally at peace and that's what happenes when he kisses Aiji ^^" he's just acting upon those emotions that make him feel that he's somewhere he belongs. not thinking what are they... uuuh i'm confusing this up aren't I? -.-
a greater present...? well I could think of few but that would rise the rating of this story XD
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Actually I was thinking about all that, too but I didn't find the rigt words to express it - easy to say now , i know, but it's true^^.
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aah ^^" so I'm glad we make things clear for each other ^^
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yeah... but honestly, I don't know how to go on now...
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aaah I'm sure you will think of something ^^ you had problems with the previous part too, and you ended up with your co-writer and daughter catching their breaths
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ah~ and I will start as soon as this TV show is over.......
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still that charity show?
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