Comments | alexriley: Fic: You Are My Past, She is My Present, We Are The Future (GL, Otalia, 5/?)

alexriley

Fic: You Are My Past, She is My Present, We Are The Future (GL, Otalia, 5/?)

Jun 01, 2009 18:31

Exasperated? No, Natalia was beyond exasperated, she was ready to stop the car and have Olivia walk herself to the courthouse. She loved the woman, she really did, but Olivia managed to push all her buttons at once. She sometimes wondered how she fell in love with the other woman, but she did. She was exasperated the night before; everything went ( Read more... )

pairing: otalia, character: olivia spencer, rating: pg, genre: femslash, fandom: guiding light, character: natalia rivera, character: original

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alexriley June 2 2009, 00:19:31 UTC

It should be good (hopefully... rereads chapter)
Thanks for the comment, I think I squee'd when I read your comment LOL!

tanama30 June 2 2009, 01:52:54 UTC

ok no what is frank asking this favor? update soon to find out what is the deal

ladyvictory June 2 2009, 02:45:56 UTC

I have enjoyed the first 4 bits, haven't had a chance to read this one yet, but wanted to comment and say, sorry I have been lurking and keep it comin!

alexriley June 2 2009, 17:13:26 UTC

All right, I'll let it fly. Thanks for the comment.

ndasky1 June 2 2009, 03:38:24 UTC

Krista is turning out to be a very interesting person. I'm curious about her connections to people in Springfield and am looking forward to reading more. Does Frank think that Krista being at the farmhouse will deter Alan from causing trouble?

alexriley June 2 2009, 17:21:59 UTC

Hey, thanks for the comment.
*narrows eyes at you* Do I know you...? Haha! That's a good question, you'll just have to read the next chapter to find out the answer. =P

revolos55 June 2 2009, 08:24:52 UTC

Handcuffs, those were what Natalia needed. - OK, right off the bat my mind is in a fun wrong place ;)

She remembered those eyes; those were the eyes of someone who wanted to protect a loved one, but failed. - Awww :(

“Cause she’s cute, that’s why you let the info slip?” - Hehehe

Gods, Alan is a dick. And Doris seriously needs some new bodyguards who a bit less punch-happy.

alexriley June 2 2009, 17:24:54 UTC

Haha, yeah, that first line I re-wrote so many times and said "What the hell, just go and make it funny."
Of course you're let the info slip to *points to icon* like would you really deny her? LOL!

Annnd agreed to that last statement to the letter. Alan's going to be an interesting character in this story of mine.

revolos55 June 3 2009, 00:59:49 UTC

Yeah, one flash of dimples and anybody is toast, even Olivia Freakin' Spencer. ;)