Oh i looove the key sequence! That last boot is hilarious. Who needs keys anyway. I really like the top part of running to the door, very dynamic, though I would make the transition between panel 2 and 3 a 11-5 angle (clock hours)instead of the 1-7 it is now, more space for the doorknob in panel2.
The last panel of 32 cracked me up, though I had to read it twice for the pacing. Perhaps some more space would get the timing right? Amen just keeps getting funnier in this chapter ^^.
Snowball! What a fantastic mess, so recognizable.. but wait! is that.. the angry flower?!? And... a bambi??! How mysterious, and exciting... I like the giant eye snowball between page 1 and 2.
btw good luck with the website, saw the preview and now I'm very curious and excited about it! You always have a great layout-style in your work, can't wait to see your personal site. And good luck with all the mom-problems, sounds like hell without end... It makes me so angry reading about it, the unfairness must be so frustrating I can't even imagine. :( Really hope it will get better soon!
Haha, thanks XD I think I need to make it clearer that those keys are different and wrong fits, I just scribbled it to fast I think.. and agreed about the running sequence, it was more cuz I wanted to draw a wacky pose than I did it cuz it makes sense <-- naughty
lol, yes that is a flower! Not Bob though (even though they look similar)... they are Les Fleurs du Mal, haha, its sort of lame but I still like it...
And thanks :3 I just finished sneaking out of the house to pay for the hosting, the layout still has its problems but hopefully the whole shebang will be up and running soon. As for mom thing, hopefully this giant fight will be over soon.
The last panel of 32 cracked me up, though I had to read it twice for the pacing. Perhaps some more space would get the timing right? Amen just keeps getting funnier in this chapter ^^.
Snowball! What a fantastic mess, so recognizable.. but wait! is that.. the angry flower?!? And... a bambi??! How mysterious, and exciting... I like the giant eye snowball between page 1 and 2.
btw good luck with the website, saw the preview and now I'm very curious and excited about it! You always have a great layout-style in your work, can't wait to see your personal site. And good luck with all the mom-problems, sounds like hell without end... It makes me so angry reading about it, the unfairness must be so frustrating I can't even imagine. :( Really hope it will get better soon!
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lol, yes that is a flower! Not Bob though (even though they look similar)... they are Les Fleurs du Mal, haha, its sort of lame but I still like it...
And thanks :3 I just finished sneaking out of the house to pay for the hosting, the layout still has its problems but hopefully the whole shebang will be up and running soon. As for mom thing, hopefully this giant fight will be over soon.
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