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A Woman Undone: Part 49/?

Jan 15, 2008 19:20

Hiiiii!!!!!!!!!!! First off - I dedicate this post to huntkitty for her gracious inquiry as to where I'd been a few days ago. A mod deleted it because she considered it "off topic," but at any rate, thank you huntkitty for your kindness. To everyone else, I thank you for your patience. The writing has really been coming along, so I'm very ( Read more... )

title: a women undone, author: whatisayouth, length: short fiction (chapter)

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triniliyah January 16 2008, 03:30:53 UTC

WOOHOO! UPDATE TIME!

liketehweather January 16 2008, 03:35:16 UTC

Damn you Trini!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanted to be first ;)

triniliyah January 16 2008, 03:37:27 UTC

opps im sorry! im just on that shit! hahaha shall i delete it?

liketehweather January 16 2008, 03:38:30 UTC

LOL .. Hell no sweetie.... you deserve it!

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liketehweather January 16 2008, 03:34:39 UTC

First off...I feel so special that I got to read this before it was posted. And secondly... Damn baby! Wow... your ability to write this awesome dialogue just fucking blows me away! Every damn time. I don't know how you do it (even though you say you just watch too much tv).
The conversation between the detectives and Alex just flows so naturally and I know it's been said before but it's like I'm watching an episode of SVU... The best episode ever!
Anyway.... I love you soo sooo sooooo much hon. Amazing job once again! Talk to you soon!
Lyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyt

whatisayouth January 16 2008, 04:46:13 UTC

I'm glad that you got to read it first too. That's YOUR special privilege. Only for you! I'm really glad that you like this story even though it takes up all my time...lol. And thank you for always finding gentle ways to point out my mistakes. You know how sensitive I am to that, and you handle it just perfectly, and I thank you for that. The conversations just kind of flow out of me, and so maybe that is from watching too much TV...lol. I would love to see this as a real episode on SVU...Wooohoooooo!

I love you soooooo soooooo soooooo much! Lyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyt

kazza1269 January 16 2008, 03:39:37 UTC

Yeah your back I was beginning to wonder. Great update sweetie more soon please.

liketehweather January 16 2008, 03:49:11 UTC

LOLOLOLOL ohhh goddd ...I'm dying.

whatisayouth January 16 2008, 04:48:40 UTC

What's so funny?

whatisayouth January 16 2008, 04:48:23 UTC

Hi there! Thanks for the warm welcome. I'm glad you liked it. And what a surprise, you want more soon...lol!

huntkitty January 16 2008, 04:02:47 UTC

thanks for dedicating this update to me. great update. i can't wait to read more.

triniliyah January 16 2008, 04:23:05 UTC

YAY for huntkitty!!! *waves*

huntkitty January 16 2008, 14:19:56 UTC

i know yay. i am happy

whatisayouth January 16 2008, 04:49:51 UTC

Well, after everything that happened, you so deserved it. I wanted to point it out to everyone because I think it deserves to be known. Anywho, thank you for commenting and for reading, as always. You're the bestest!

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orgasmically good!....no, not good, GREAT! triniliyah January 16 2008, 04:22:03 UTC

"...she thought to herself that if she should have the opportunity to squeeze someone else in the process, that certainly would bring a smile to her face." hahaha shame on you Alex! Alex is sooo an honorary gutter neighbor for that line ( ... )

Re: orgasmically good!....no, not good, GREAT! whatisayouth January 16 2008, 04:55:45 UTC

Did you mean to say, "That's why I hate defense attorneys" instead of DON'T hate defense attorneys in the third paragraph, fourth sentence? Just wondering.

I'm really happy that you liked this update so much. The parts you quoted above are ones that I thought about while I was making toast and I ran back into my room to quickly type them out. I get some of my most favorite ideas when I'm making toast. I wonder why?

I think your HOLY SHIT WOW summary says it all, and it's good enough for me...lol. I try really hard to pinpoint Alex's personality because she's the main character in my mind and she's my favorite and she's the one who's changing the most. It's important to clarify what she feels so that you can compare it to how she feels later. Does that make sense?

Anyway, your passion for this story almost matches my own *winks* and I love that.

Re: orgasmically good!....no, not good, GREAT! triniliyah January 16 2008, 05:34:08 UTC

yep that's what i meant! hahaha silly me!

and that does make perfect sense. i love how we're on this journey with Alex and we're getting to know her as she discovers herself. i think you said it better than me, she's the main character and she's the one who's changing the most.

i say so much but i feel like im bursting to say so much more but i can't get it all out clearly sometimes so 'holy shit wow' has to be it for me. hahaha

oh and im definitley passionate about this story, i dread my first day of work tomorrow, although im excited to be working with poeple in law enforcement,fire services, and nature conservation but that means my time is now divided. and come thursday when school starts, i'll struggle to find time for this passion but i'll be around.

Re: orgasmically good!....no, not good, GREAT! whatisayouth January 16 2008, 05:37:25 UTC

Good luck on your first day tomorrow. Kick some ass and take some names! Lol...maybe that's not a part of your job, not yet at least. As for school AND work together, make sure to still find time for yourself and that doesn't include reading this story. I don't want you to feel like you HAVE to always comment and stuff like that because I know how busy you'll be. I just wanted to tell you that. And if I don't see you around for a while, know that you'll be missed.

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