Comments | alex_liv_lovers: Part One

kkftkk in alex_liv_lovers

Part One - Long Road Home

Aug 08, 2007 14:46

Okay, here is the first part of my new story.

Thank You all so much for the comments and keep them coming.

I hope you like this, but please, i take critisim well.

Long Road Home
KKftKK

Part One

~Four Months Earlier~

The bullpen was crowded, and Olivia had to push past a few people, her coffee held high over her head so she could reach her desk without ( Read more... )

length: ep!fic, title: long road home, author: kkftkk, rating: r

Comments 8

apophantic August 8 2007, 05:32:08 UTC

OK, I think you're my new best friend. LOL

Your story is very well written, I love the details and your use of the characters. Very nice. You have a Xena/Gab icon. You are listening to Mika.

you = teh awesome.

aaaand done lol

apophantic August 8 2007, 05:41:11 UTC

Why thank you. My icon is kinda sexy, i mean... who doesn't love Xena/Gab?

apophantic August 8 2007, 06:01:34 UTC

SERIOUSLY.

kazza1269 August 8 2007, 05:42:46 UTC

WOW!! When I read the prologue I admit I wasn't sure about this story but reading this first chapter you have me hooked. One thing is for sure alot must happen in the next four months to Liv. Please update again soon. :)

buildngnempire August 8 2007, 06:07:11 UTC

i can't wait for another update, or to find out exactly how she becomes addicted to heroin lol great start so far :)

kca4o August 8 2007, 16:22:14 UTC

I like it, I like it!! no no, scratch that, I LOVE IT!! this is a great update. look forward to reading the next chapter.
KC
;)

kkftkk August 8 2007, 16:49:55 UTC

Okay, well i think it's important for me to say that this fic isn't going to be a lighthearted one, obviously.
Also, i'd like everyone to know that even though this never happened to me, the basis of my storyline i got from my boyfriend, who died of a heroin overdose about four months ago.
Now, helping people with drug problems is a passion of mine, and i think it's important to have awareness out there, so everyone knows what drugs can do to people.
Helping people is how i deal with losing who i thought was going to be my future husband, so i hope that you all don't just get entertainment from this fic, but also information and awareness.
If you know someone with signs of having a drug addiction, i think it's important that you try to help them as much as possible.
Sorry for the rambing, i just wanted people to be aware.

R.I.P. William, I love you.

Thanks Everyone
KKftKK

half_life33 August 9 2007, 14:42:57 UTC

ahh!!
i couldn't help smiling.. this is a cool first chapter.. can't wait or the next ones!