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Fic: Alex's New Beau 1/?

Jul 01, 2006 11:07

Title: Alex’s New Beau (has got to go)
Summary: OA. Getting back together isn’t going as smoothly as either of them expected. Especially when Alex walks out on them.
Rating: R, for the language, and eventually some disturbing scenes.
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title: alex's new beau, length: ep!fic, author: haha_pie, rating: r

Comments 14

elfcat255 July 1 2006, 15:50:02 UTC

very interesting..good start..just a helpful note here..you may want to go back in and work on the spacing..it all kind of runs together...but its good

haha_pie July 4 2006, 04:14:39 UTC

thanks for the pointer about the spacing, it does look better this way, much easier to read :)

elfcat255 July 4 2006, 04:16:38 UTC

No problem..I kinda did the same thing when I posted some of my stuff..had to go back in and fix it.

chirimiri July 1 2006, 15:54:10 UTC

Intense. I like it.

hauntedgraysky July 1 2006, 16:09:03 UTC

Ooooooh! I'm lovin' it!

clairebrmunch July 1 2006, 16:15:02 UTC

ooo i like them argueing, well i dont...but i do lol its so intense! hoping they make up soon tho!

alexlivilla_70 July 1 2006, 16:20:40 UTC

Fight! more pleaes!

nonstickbandage July 1 2006, 16:31:51 UTC

I relay relay look forward to reading more of this