Comments | alex51324: Post-Trauma 7.1/ ?

alex51324

Post-Trauma 7.1/ ?

Jan 14, 2007 04:01

“We only have a couple more minutes, Sarah,” Temas says, preparing his patient for the upcoming end of their session.

“The Mommy and the babies aren’t ready to go out yet,” the girl points out. She’s just finished changing the clothes on most of the dollhouse family, and now she has the mother doll posed in front of the ( Read more... )

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mad_march_hare January 14 2007, 15:09:26 UTC

Grr, Cameron! I want to smack her! Argh!

Now that that's over with... *prostrates self before you* I love every chapter and everything you write! Hurt/comfort is my guilty pleasure, and you're doling it oout in delicious, well-written, realistic SPADES. *gives you roses and Swiss chocs*

More, more, I say! House may not be addicted, but I am! I need my next fic fix! ^_^

anonymous January 15 2007, 17:32:10 UTC

Yes, I too need my next fix, the next part of this. It's been a great ride so far. Keep it up. (I'm MisanthropicObs on TWoP).

delphinapterus January 16 2007, 05:12:08 UTC

I love how you're fixing House at a reasonable rate - no magical healing cock, dream sequence, or anything like that. Very well done. I'm really looking forward to seeing more.

Cameron seems to be in fine form. Nicely in character for all the ducklings.

alex51324 January 16 2007, 05:18:18 UTC

Yeah, I really hate unrealistic healing from psychological trauma. I think it's very important to show here that just knowing what happened doesn't magically make him all better. And yeah, the magical healing cock is teh cheeziest.

Post-Trauma anonymous April 20 2007, 07:02:12 UTC

I really loved the rhythm between House and Wilson. You picked up the subtleties from the show. Wilson IS House's friend, protector, and teacher. I have a theory as to why but I won't go into it here. On the show Wilson usually buys lunch, or other items he wants, mostly from the candy counter. But House also takes from his tray. Wilson will also show up whenever House calls when he needs a sounding board. Even if Wilson has dinner guests at home!! But your story REALLY picked up for me with the rescue trip. Simply fixing the problem by replaying it. I loved the store shopping, especially the toy section. That entire trip was just so sweet. I could hear them in my head. Wilson's heartbreak over House's pain and House's complete trust in Wilson. On the show Wilson IS the only one he will tell anything to and say "I need your help." And the only one he will allow to help him as a doctor. It was a great piece of writing. Thanks for sharing. Robin