Comments | alex51324: Sentinel!Neal 19/19

alex51324

Sentinel!Neal 19/19

Dec 04, 2012 00:18

Here's a request from a help_horses participant: the next (and last) installment of Sentinel!Neal. As you'll see, I've left myself plenty of scope for a sequel, but I think I've done everything I had in mind for this story. Thank you, Debs, for the generous donation that provided the necessary kick in the rear for me to come back to this universe ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

springwoof December 4 2012, 08:17:53 UTC

that was delicious! Seriously hot, and a fantastic ending to your Sentinel Neal story.

Thank you, Debs!

alex51324 December 5 2012, 05:30:38 UTC

Thanks for commenting!

linnet_melody December 4 2012, 13:29:55 UTC

HOOORAAAAY!! \0/

Smoking hot, as always. Hugs to you, and a huuuuuge Kudos to Debs for her persistence and effectiveness in "Author Pestering!" Hee.

*hug!*

alex51324 December 5 2012, 05:31:17 UTC

Thanks!

dru_evilista December 4 2012, 19:18:57 UTC

OMG Yay! Love this. Sad to see it end, but loved the way it ended. Went back and read the last few chapters to refresh my self, and fell in love with this fic all over again. Love Angel and his lack of filter, and Peter/El/Neal finely getting together. And Neal's logic of "Well everyone already thinks we're doing it, so we should just do it!"

alex51324 December 5 2012, 05:30:15 UTC

Thanks! One of the things that was holding me up on writing this last part was that I couldn't quite figure out how P/E/N get past the Not Talking About It thing, and I didn't want to have El swoop in and fix everything. So I thought, well, if someone brings it up, they'll have to start talking about it...but who would be that clueless?

Once I put it that way, the answer was obvious.

skeptic7 December 5 2012, 05:24:54 UTC

That was just great. Kas and Angel throw the best parties and have the nicest guests. I'm so really happy that you mentioned them and I have a real fondness for Angel's llamas. I'm so happy that he has more than one and that they call to him. I love Angel bringing up orgies and Kas coming over to apologize.

alex51324 December 5 2012, 05:27:32 UTC

Thanks! I'm not entirely sure how Angel ended up with llamas in this universe, since their entire Peruvian adventure began with G-TAC, and it doesn't exist...possibly they went down to see the Temple of the Sentinels, dunno.

lovetravels December 7 2012, 01:12:24 UTC

Holy Crap that was hot! YAY! Thank you for finishing the story (though I really, really hope you decided to follow up with a sequel!) Loved Elizabeth's piece of the story. My favorite part of White Collar is her interaction between the boys, you did a great job of bring that into this fic.