Sentinel!Neal 14

[alex51324]

I may be getting close to the point of really not writing this for a while, soon. I am a little stuck on what comes after this bit. The next thing I really know about is the Neal/Peter slashyness, and I'm not sure how I get there from here.

Comments

[raven_tree]

Poor Neal. Not so much poor Kate, but poor Neal... I love this fic!

[wickhouse2005]

I don't read many gen fics, but this could be a gen bonding fic. I think if we move into slash it will have to come from Peter. Maybe guide Sara playing around with Neal gets Peter's possessiveness going. Especially if Peter believes that she is one more guide that will lead Neal astray.

[joannindiw]

Oh, ow.

Er. Mostly because I just love senfic - you don't actually have to link the bits you post, you know? You could do a hand-wavy intro saying something in after lots of time and stuff happens... ^^VVVVV I hope you write more of this verse, slashiness or not. :D

[springwoof]

Exciting action, but so sad at the end. I liked the part where Neal first got Kate's scent and wondered why he was working to bring her in, then was reminded of Peter and Sofia and thought "that's why". I also liked the scene in the coffee shop, where Neal definitely ruled out Mozzie because the food ordered had lactose and gluten...
Very well done!

[percygranger]

This was a good part. The flow was nice, a bit faster than the rest, which is wonderful because there was some lovely action. Kate's death made me sad, even if she was being all illegal and mean. :(

On slashy goodness (yay): You mentioned 'bodywork' as the next thing they're going to do at the university? That sounds like a wonderful opportunity to me. Get them touching each other, feeling the closeness, maybe a bit riled up, and then back at the cabin...

My only question is how does Peter okay this with Elizabeth? Because Peter must okay this with Elizabeth, because this is one of those 'major life decisions' he mentioned earlier (and also my headcanon regarding all things Peter/Neal).

[alex51324]

Yes, Peter and Elizabeth will be having a serious conversation about this before anything overtly sexual happens. What's coming up is...well, you'll see. It's sexy without being a violation of anyone's marital vows.