Morning Glow

[alerias_writing]

Fandom: Final Fantasy X
Characters: Yuna and Lulu
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Characters don't belong to me. I was simply inspired by this song on the way home from work today.
Notes: Short drabble, featuring Lulu and Yuna after the events of FFX. Pumped it out after work while I still had some of the visuals and conversation dancing around.

Comments

[auronlu]

Sniffle. Yes, Lulu loves her summoner, but Yuna's looking away.

I like the observation that Lulu has been hardened by loss, and hopes/thinks that Yuna won't be.

Minor detail: I'm curious about the use of capitalizatons: Morning Dew, e.g. (isn't that a soft drink?)

[alerias_writing]

I experimented with capitalization more than I typically do, I'm glad you commented on it. Do you think it is distracting in a negative way?

Hi!

[anonymous]

I really like the way you write! I was just wondering if you are going to update Rising Phoenix, a story I really liked. There aren't many good fanfictions of QuistisxRinoa, and yours is great. If not it would be a shame :(.

Well, Regards!

Re: Hi!

[alerias_writing]

Hi! Thanks for the comment. Rising Phoenix is on sort of a hiatus right now. I made many adjustments to the story and was experimenting with P.O.V. and other things a couple of years ago, turning it away from a fanfiction into something more original. So I changed their names and everything. However, if you are still interested in reading the changes I made and what I have done I will gladly email it to you. I am always looking for more readers and feedback!

The main reason Rising Phoenix is on hiatus is because I have been working with a co-author on finishing a large fantasy project and we are hoping to be reading to start submitting unsolicited manuscripts to publishing companies. We have a trilogy planned, and have over 400 pages of the first installment written out.

Sorry for droning on, but I am really excited to hear from people who like to read my stuff! Like I said, I am always looking for more readers so if you are interested in any of my current projects or wanna chat we can exchange email addresses.

Re: Hi!

[anonymous]

Hello, thanks for answering my comment! I think it's great that you are working in a big project! Too bad is not about Quistis and Rinoa anymore :( because I really like that pairing, but well if you say you continued the story but with other characters, then I would be glad to read it :), and I'll just pretend is about Quistis and Rinoa still xD.

I'll leave you my e-mail if you wanna share your work, I would appreciate it. It's jbrielle@hotmail.com

P.S. If my english is strange or funny it's because it's not my mother tongue :P